Dear Kenneth,
My comments:
* Wrong format in header
* Wrong format in footer
* No sections per GE in the backlog items at the end. Plain list
mixing items from different GEs. Create per GE sections, as always.
* All the "Retrieved from ..." should be deleted
* I see things like "Monitoring (Sextant) (Support Mode) " in red.
Please do not use red - it suggests that something is wrong or in
draft format, and it is not the case. Explain in the table (briefly)
what this means. Correct both in the wiki and the document.
* There are multiple inconsistencies between the Releases assigned to
the Features on the backlog and on the roadmap, particularly in
those GEs owned by IBM (I just looked at two of them and stopped
checking). This should have been corrected before sending it for
delivery and it is a major failure on the side of the GE owner and
also on the side of the cloud chapter leader who should have ensured
quality. _Leave it as it is_, we want to deliver/review roughly 50
documents in a few weeks and I suspect that I will find the same in
at least part of the chapters. I need to avoid infinite loops with
each one of them so I will turn a blind eye. But I wanted to express
my disappointment for the lack of control+work in this deliverable.
Maybe if you compare with the deliverable for Release 4 and you'll
understand part of the comments.
Best regards,
Miguel
El 21/09/2016 a las 11:52, Kenneth Nagin escribió:
>
> As we know the toaster tool does not handle tables well and did not
> insert the road map page at all
> (https://forge.fiware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Roadmap_of_Cloud_Hosting).
> I had to do all this manually.
>
> https://forge.fiware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Releases_and_Sprints_numbering,_with_mapping_to_calendar_dates is
> unreadable even on the web. It stops at Oct 2013. As per your advise
> I found an old version and used that.
>
> Unfortunately the table on page 13 overlaps the header. I could not
> find a way around this problem.
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Kenneth Nagin
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>
>
>
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