[Fiware-ga] Press release

[Butler, Joe M]

Dear all -

I offered to do a final proof read on this from a native speaker perspective.

Here is a light revision that tries to make the text easier to read, and provide a bit more context for a reader unfamiliar with the PPP.

Jose is travelling and he asked me to forward it to the full list.


- jb

From: fiware-ga-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu [mailto:fiware-ga-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] On Behalf Of JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO
Sent: Monday, October 24, 2011 8:03 AM
To: 'Bauer, Nicole'; 'Chani Sacharen'
Cc: M. ELENA TIRADO FERNANDEZ; 'fiware-ga at lists.fi-ware.eu'
Subject: Re: [Fiware-ga] Press release


Dear all

We've made some last minute changes, essentially in the title. Hopefully this time it satisfies everybody.


BR

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Jose Jimenez
Telefonica  I+D
jimenez at tid.es
tf +34 91 4832660


De: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO
Enviado el: viernes, 21 de octubre de 2011 22:09
Para: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO; 'Bauer, Nicole'; 'Chani Sacharen'
CC: M. ELENA TIRADO FERNANDEZ; 'fiware-ga at lists.fi-ware.eu'
Asunto: RE: Press release

Right..

Hopefully this time without mistakes

BR

From: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO
Sent: jueves, 20 de octubre de 2011 16:50
To: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO; 'Bauer, Nicole'; 'Chani Sacharen'
Cc: M. ELENA TIRADO FERNANDEZ; 'fiware-ga at lists.fi-ware.eu'
Subject: RE: Press release

Sorry for the mistake. I used the wrong file

This should be the final version. Thank you  Henrik for pointing the mistake


BR


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Jose Jimenez
Telefonica I+D
Madrid
jimenez at tid.es
+34 91 483 2660

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De: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO
Enviado el: jueves, 20 de octubre de 2011 16:35
Para: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO; 'Bauer, Nicole'; 'Chani Sacharen'
CC: M. ELENA TIRADO FERNANDEZ; 'fiware-ga at lists.fi-ware.eu'
Asunto: RE: Press release
Dear all

We have tried to incorporate all your comments in the Press Release.

This should be the final version if there are no further comments (please, all who made comments, check if everything is all right)




BR

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Jose Jimenez
Telefonica I+D
Madrid
jimenez at tid.es
+34 91 483 2660

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De: JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO
Enviado el: jueves, 13 de octubre de 2011 12:45
Para: 'Bauer, Nicole'; 'Chani Sacharen'
CC: M. ELENA TIRADO FERNANDEZ; 'fiware-ga at lists.fi-ware.eu'
Asunto: Press release (very first draft)
Dear all

Please find attached the first version of the press release as elaborated by our PR department.

Of course, comments and suggestions are most welcomed. Please remember we should try to finish the document in the coming days

Best regards


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Jose Jimenez
Telefonica  I+D
jimenez at tid.es
tf +34 91 4832660



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