[Fiware-i2nd] I2ND Deliverable final round - minor action required now

[Federico Cimorelli]

Dear Giovanni,

please find attached a revised version of the document that addresses the 
comments related to the OFNIC GE.

Best regards,
Federico Cimorelli.

On Wednesday, June 03, 2015 01:56:26 PM Toffetti Carughi Giovanni wrote:
> Dear I2NDers,
> 
> FYI please find attached the latest version of the deliverable.
> 
> Pier and I went through the latest version of the Architecture document,
> apart from fixing the formatting and figures we did the minor changes
> listed below.
> 
> Please all GE owners take a look as the changes should be reflected in your
> wiki pages / might require some change on our part in the Word Doc if you
> disagree.
> 
>  -      Updated the architecture description with comments you mentioned as
> not yet addressed, please have a look (especially for the Security one, as
> I'm not completely sure there can be ways for Netfloc to support
> improvement of Security GE functionality) -       Modified a bit the
> Robotics, to introduce the compliance of FIROS interface with FIWARE NGSI
> specifications (maybe we could put a link to that wiki page too). -      
> Completed the 'Copyright' section in the wiki page of Netfloc (it was
> missing) -       Added the 'Legal Notice' section in the wiki page of
> Netfloc (it was missing) -       Verified that some updates to Netfloc in
> response to cross-review comments are not visibile (however this is minor
> issue, they can be derived by the separate document used by the GE owner to
> introduce the updates) -       Verified that some modifications to Netfloc
> section are not yet updated in the wiki page -       Verified that a
> comment by you in OFNIC section 'Basic Design Principles' might require an
> additional update by GE Owner
> 
> Besides these minor things, I believe that the document is now taking into
> account the remarks from cross-review, and a clean version can be prepared
> for delivery.
> 
> We can wait until this afternoon at 18:00 CEST to let GE owners/teams
> provide final their remarks/updates in response to the points I have listed
> above; then I'll proceed to produce and upload the two docs (i.e. the one
> with modifications visible, and the clean one) on the shared page keeping
> track of all architecture deliverables.
> 
> When this is done, a copy of all the architecture wiki pages from the
> private I2ND to the public FIWARE wiki will be done (Pier+Giovanni), so
> that all the material is available there as expected. So if you didn't /
> don't / won't update the private wiki pages before 6PM today remember you
> will have to update both private and public pages after that.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> g
> 
> 
> --
> ----
> Giovanni Toffetti, Ph.D.   toff at zhaw.ch<mailto:toff at zhaw.ch>
> InIT Cloud Computing Lab - ICCLab http://blog.zhaw.ch/icclab
> Institute of Applied Information Technology - InIT
> School of Engineering
> Zurich University of Applied Sciences - ZHAW
> Phone: +41 58 934 6964
-- 
Federico Cimorelli
Ph.D Student in Control Engineering
University of Rome 'La Sapienza'
Department of Computer, Automation and Management Engineering
tel. +39 06 77274034
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email: federico.cimorelli at uniroma1.it 
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