[Fiware-miwi] WP13 Open Specs ready for delivery: please check changes !!

MIGUEL CARRILLO PACHECO miguel.carrillopacheco at telefonica.com
Mon Aug 11 10:08:17 CEST 2014

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Dear Christof,

This message crossed with one I sent you in private.

Good news then! Thanks for that.

We leave work at 3pm in the summer here at Telefonica and then I have personal commitments later, waiting till the afternoon/evening would take the delivery to tomorrow. I prefer to take it up and deliver as you have confirmed that this copy is ok to deliver. I will just accept the changes and modify the cover. The cover gets distorted on my PC- this is what I meant by "Cover format changes". I assume that the doc looks different on your PC and mine. I will make it look nice on my computer to be able to create the pdf file.

[cid:part1.03010905.05010209 at telefonica.com]

Let us close this deliverable at once. I will look into this and deliver in a few minutes. I will create the pdf and upload all to the forge.

Porting to the public wiki asap is welcome but not necessarily today - I mean, do not leave if for too long but porting it the same date than the delivery date is a not a strong requisite.

Best regards,

Miguel

El 11/08/2014 8:45, Marti Christof (mach) escribió:
Hi Miguel

Thanks you very much.
I checked all your changes and incorporated also the updates and suggestions from Manuels earlier review.
I did it in „change tracking mode“. So you an easily see the changes. Most of them are spelling corrections or format enhancements (e.g. tables instead of pre-formated text).

>From WP13 side it is ready to deliver.
Please let me know if it is OK for you, so I can create the final document (Word/PDF) and upload it to forge (or are you doing this?).

I also updated the wiki with all the changes and will copy the pages to the public wiki this afternoon/evening, if it is OK for you.

Best regards
Christof

Am 07.08.2014 um 11:18 schrieb MIGUEL CARRILLO PACHECO <miguel.carrillopacheco at telefonica.com<mailto:miguel.carrillopacheco at telefonica.com>>:

Dear all,

First of all, my most sincere apologies, it has been impossible to look at this until now. I did a very shallow review and changed a few things. Note that some impact the Terms and Conditions. The general aspect is rather good.

As there are modifications, I will wait for a few days as a precautionary measure. I will deliver at the end of Monday if no one objects. If the WPL confirms on behalf of the WP that we can deliver before then, I will do so.

A detailed account of the changes follow. I also enclose the doc in pdf and word format.

Best regards,

Miguel
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* Removed the 2 sections with DaaS from the text
* Removed DaaS from the picture under 1.4 Chapter Context
* Removed the two links for DaaS under 1.5 Structure of this document
* MiWi 3D-UI with old license - replaced by implicit patents license (as per the orders received from Juanjo)
* Section 18.1 POI Data Provider - ditto
* Added an entry under 1.9 Changes History and modified the cover accordingly
* Cover format changes
* Section 1.4: small typo amended (aka as MiWi -> "AKA MiWi")
* Fixed wrong link under "2.6.2 Classification of functions"
* In 3.1 link to "eProsima RPC over DDS" - I reuse the one they use later in the same section for "Introduction to RPC over DDS ". I guess that it was not the same but I cannot delay a delivery for this.
* All the boxes that contain a link under "chapter" that points at a category that does not exist. Clicking on the link causes a browser error. (Example: 2 FIWARE OpenSpecification MiWi Middleware). I leave them as they are in the hope that that such category will be created and it will exist once the Open Specs are ported to the public wiki... i.e. the links should work once ported.
* 18.1.5 I removed this remark, which is not acceptable: "You can download the most current version of this document from the FIWARE Open Specification website at D.13.1.2_FI-WARE_GE_Open_Specifications_front_page. ". This page is for internal use and it is not intended for this.
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