Hi,
Thanks for that, it looks spotless. I superficially checked the Materializing page and a couple of redirects at random. It looks good.
Now WP13 has passed from not being there to being the only one up to date in FI-WARE! Others will follow soon, hopefully.
Now it is time to complete the work:
* Automated deployment
* Bundles/packaging
* Catalogue entries
Note that the reviewers left it very clear: they wanted precisely these and we will be judged on the basis of making our work easy to use and available via FI-Lab.
Best regards,
Miguel
El 26/06/2014 18:32, Marti Christof (mach) escribió:
Hi Miguel
The R3 issues are now also fixed in the wiki (incl. Cover pages and MiWi context page -> aka.)
The Unit Testing Plans (and Report) pages are also moved and I updated the links on the materializing page and all the other pages I could find references (in the public wiki). I even updated the links in the Unit Testing Report R3 wiki page and on the UTP Cover page.
So no links to the wrong pages on the public wiki.
I also checked that the links from external sources (private wiki, PDFs, Word documents) are getting redirected to the correct page.
Hope this fixes this issue.
Best regards
Christof
Am 26.06.2014 um 16:42 schrieb Miguel Carrillo <mcp at tid.es<mailto:mcp at tid.es>>:
renaming the Unit Testing Plan can be done tomorrow ... not to be left forgotten but not vitally urgent
important: leave redirects to the old pages, this is something you can automatically do when you "move" a wiki page (there is a checkbox or something, I do not remember how it was) . If not, the links in the doc we are delivering will take to broken links
El 26/06/2014 16:20, Marti Christof (mach) escribió:
Hi Miguel
Thanks your great effort and fast response.
I fixed the Word-Documents and uploaded the DOCX and PDF files to the FI-WARE (public) Docs Folder<https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/index.php?group_id=7#>.
PDFs are set to active, DOCX files are set to private.
I am now working on fixing the wiki and renaming the Unit Testing Plan (and Report) pages.
Will send another email, when done.
Best regards
Christof
Am 26.06.2014 um 13:09 schrieb Miguel Carrillo <mcp at tid.es<mailto:mcp at tid.es>>:
Hi,
It finally took more than 3 hours to inspect, this is huge. I did not read it all (it would take a week) but gave it a serious go, looking at consistency, general aspect, the overall structure and testing links here and there. This is what we have (please have mercy on me and avoid bombarding me with individual messages from individual GE owners!)
The general aspect is rather good and this is suitable for delivery. Once you fix the comments I provide (all easy to fix), please create the MiWi folder in the PUBLIC project (FI-WARE) and upload the docs (word and pdf) to it. The pdf files will be public and the doc files have to be made private after uploading them (pretty much the same as R2). Let me know when this is done and we will deliver.
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Detailed comments follow.
I want to remark that I am not asking you to regenerate the docs, all can be directly edited on the word doc and/or the wiki.
If comments are addressed, all this is done before 4pm and I do not find further issues, I commit myself to deliver WP13 today.
(hooray!!!)
Best regards,
Miguel
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D13.2.3. SW
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Basically, ok.
Please remove the link under 1.5 and leave it as plain text
D13.3.3 INS
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Basically, ok.
(really) minor comment: in 1.4 I read " aka. as MiWi" - the "as" is redundant (AKA = also known as)
Under MIWI virtual characters I read " Download a packaged release from https://forge.fi-ware.org/frs/download.php/1138/MIWI-VirtualCharacters-3.3.3.zip " However, the link on the forge for this is https://forge.fi-ware.org/frs/download.php/1151/MIWI-VirtualCharacters-3.3.3.zip (at least this is the one I find)
" RPC over DDS is based on the Data Distribution Service (DDS) specifications, an OMG Standard defining the API and Protocol for high performance publish-subscribe middleware. eProsima RPC over DDS is an Remote Procedure Call framework using DDS as the transport and is based on the ongoing OMG RPC for DDS standard. In this release of the middleware for FI-WARE (R3.2),..." -> do you mean R3.3, maybe?? (fix in the word doc directly and also on the source wiki page)
D13.4.3 USER
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Basically, ok.
The same (really) minor comment: in 1.4 I read "aka. as MiWi" - the "as" is redundant (AKA = also known as)
Change history with a typo: Initaial Version
Repeated sections in "Middleware - KIARA - User and Programmers Guide". No need to regenerate the doc, just:
* Fix this on the word doc directly
* Fix it on the source page:
https://forge.fi-ware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Middleware_-_KIARA_-_User_and_Programmers_Guide
D13.5.3 UTP
============
The same (really) minor comment: in 1.4 I read "aka. as MiWi" - the "as" is redundant (AKA = also known as)
Remove links to non public wikis:
* Leave as plain text the link "Unit Testing Report R3 - MiWi" under "1.5 Structure of this Document "
* Ditto at the beginning of "20 Unit Testing Report R3 - MiWi" ("You can find the content of this chapter as well in the wiki of fi-ware.")
There is a mistake in all the "Materializing" page that I failed to spot when I reviewed it. We will deliver as it is now(we can live with this in the deliverables. No one will notice it, hopefully). But it has to be fixed immediately after. The pages should not have the "and report" part in the name. Example:
* Cloud Rendering - Unit Testing Plan and Report<https://forge.fi-ware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Cloud_Rendering_-_Unit_Testing_Plan_and_Report>
This should be called Cloud Rendering - Unit Testing Plan and Report (rationale: can you see any report in the page at all??)
"and report" is part of the deliverable name - it does not apply to the name of individual pages. This is easy to fix with the "move" tab on the wiki and changing the links on "materializing ... " - if you do not have access to this functionality, let me know.
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