[Fiware-miwi] D.2.6.3 SotA Analysis - Emerging technologies WP13 contribution (internal review roundtrip)

Cvetan Stefanovski cvetan at adminotech.com
Wed Mar 19 14:13:47 CET 2014


Hello,

Here's Adminotech part of the internal review for SotA


On Mon, Mar 17, 2014 at 6:14 PM, Christof Marti <mach at zhaw.ch> wrote:

> Hi Philipp
>
> Can I delegate the finalization of the D.2.6.3 WP13 SoTA contribution to
> you?
>
> I am very busy going through OpenSpecs v3 and create the D.13.1.3
> Deliverable
> and also checking all the Release 3 comments (Guides, UTP) and prepare
> feedback
> for Miguel, to get the release-review process going again.
>
> Important: In todays WPL/WPA call it was pointed out, that we also have to
> provide a management summary (~ 1 page), containing only the newest
> developments.
> (For the other chapters this are the changes since last release of the
> deliverable)
> (For us this could be a compilation from the last part of all the GEs sota)
>
> Best regards
> Christof
>
> Am 16.03.2014 um 10:48 schrieb Philipp Slusallek <
> Philipp.Slusallek at dfki.de>:
>
> > Hi,
> >
> > I did go through the text and fixed quite a few missing references and
> > marked some others that are still missing (please can some of the people
> > involved in those GEs fix them).
> >
> > In general, there is a lack of references to previous work in quite a
> > few of the GE descriptions. Please follow the model we have done in the
> > middleware section and add some more references to previous work and
> > then position your work in FI-WARE in relation to that.
> >
> >
> > Best,
> >
> >       Philipp
> >
> >
> > Am 15.03.2014 08:13, schrieb Jarkko Vatjus-Anttila:
> >> Hello,
> >>
> >> I read through the paper in my behalf, and the text seems to be pretty
> >> much collected from the text that has been formulated already earlier. I
> >> my opinion, it gives an overview of the state of the art and as such I
> >> would guess it works as a deliverable for this purpose. However, having
> >> said that, I may not know all exact requirements what this deliverable
> >> is expected to fulfill.
> >>
> >> I made minor changes here and there, mainly fixing misspellings and word
> >> ordering. The modified document is attached here, with track changes
> >> enabled.
> >>
> >> - jarkko
> >>
> >>
> >> On Fri, Mar 14, 2014 at 10:00 PM, Marti Christof (mach) <mach at zhaw.ch
> >> <mailto:mach at zhaw.ch>> wrote:
> >>
> >>    Hi Philipp, dear WP13 GE Owners
> >>
> >>    Also due in M36 is an updated version (D.2.6.3) of the "State of the
> >>    art analysis - emerging technologies" deliverable. The previous
> >>    release can be found here:
> >>
> https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+-+Emerging+Technologies.pdf<https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+%E2%80%93+Emerging+Technologies.pdf>
> >>    <
> https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+%E2%80%93+Emerging+Technologies.pdf
> >
> >>
> >>    Idea for all existing WPs is to provide a management summary and do
> >>    only required updates on the existing chapters.
> >>    Because there is no Web User Interfaces chapter in the last
> >>    deliverable I took the content from the FI-Core proposal and tried
> >>    to put together a WP13 contribution for this deliverable.
> >>    It was more work than expected, because the writing style in a
> >>    proposal is a little bit different than for this deliverable. So I
> >>    would like to ask Philipp (and the respective GE owner for their
> >>    part) to review the attached document (in change tracking mode), add
> >>    missing content and in particular also add missing entries in the
> >>    "Reference" section.
> >>
> >>    Deadline for delivering updates to the coordinator for review is/was
> >>    today (March 14th). Because of this additional internal review
> >>    roundtrip, this will not be feasible.
> >>    If each GE owner can review its 20 to 30 lines and Philipp keeps am
> >>    eye on the overarching context until Monday noon, the delay would be
> >>    minimal.
> >>
> >>    Thanks for your contributions.
> >>
> >>    @Miguel, Juanjo: I do not want to release this without the OK of
> >>    Philipp and the domain experts.
> >>
> >>    Best regards
> >>    Christof
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> >>
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