Dear all, Here is a section 2.1 update. LUIS will look at the 2.1.1 points 4-9. Any VOLUNTEERS to look through 1-3? I am expecting inputs from MARGARIDA for the KPIs – she will collect this form the cities. I need the Mexican City description. SERGIO I need ATOS - NURIA, TELEFONICA - SERGIO, PHILIPS - REMCO, ENGINEERING - STEPHANO to look at 2.1.2.10 and shorten to 1-2 pages. Each company gets 1/3 page max. MIRKO to write an intro to 2.1.2 based on the moved figure (Arup Table) which sits now in section 1. We have 9 cities (including the Mexican city) - this means that with 1 page per city we spend 50% on that. Most of the content is boasting how great the cities already are. We don’t need that in this section – that can be in section 4 – what we need is how SynchroiCity will help you propel you even further into becoming an even greater city. So – EACH CITY should revise their inputs to focus on IMPACT and not how great they are. 2/3 pages per city is max. Any VOLUNTEERS to check barriers and obstacles 2.1.3? - shorten to 1.5 pages SERGIO – I need that standards table 2.1.4. I have deleted the section on other societal impact that Pentti made based on PEST – it was too generic. MARTIN – please give me a first draft for 2.1.5 Quantifiable Impact of the Project form a project perspective – cities will be coming in from MARGARIDA’s work. Ana – could you give a status on 2.2? Finally we have a page limit problem. We need to cut this down to 20 pages. Including 2.2! So we are not looking for volume. Thanks Mirko ____________________________________________ MIRKO PRESSER INTERNET OF THINGS EXPERT AND TEAM LEADER DATA SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING LAB ALEXANDRA INSTITUTTET A/S ÅBOGADE 34, 8200 AARHUS N KONTOR: HOPPER-333 + 45 30 49 09 76 mirko.presser at alexandra.dk<mailto:fornavn.efternavn at alexandra.dk> alexandra.dk<http://www.alexandra.dk/> linkedin.com/in/mirkopresser<http://linkedin.com/in/mirkopresser> twitter.com/mirkopresser<http://twitter.com/mirkopresser> ____________________________________________ -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities/attachments/20160409/5a67b589/attachment.html> -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: Synchronicity Project Proposal Part B Section 2 MASTER.docx Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document Size: 289894 bytes Desc: Synchronicity Project Proposal Part B Section 2 MASTER.docx URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities/attachments/20160409/5a67b589/attachment.docx>
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