[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 1 - need help on KPI targets and Rerefences

Alex Gluhak alex.gluhak at digicatapult.org.uk
Sat Apr 9 22:56:12 CEST 2016


Hi all

Here is another iteration of section 1 which integrates reviews/edit from Bram, Martin, Sebastien and Luis! Thanks again for providing these

I have developed a new set KPIs in section 1.1.4 – new ideas from you are appreciated including realistic target settings…

Also I need references in the technology SOTA table for all items –Sergio – could you please help?

Other than that the section is more or less complete in terms of content.

The document is now open for a further review round!

Our expert reviewers for this round will be

  *   Margrarida
  *   Adrian (proper English review of the doc please!)

I will pickup further editing of section 1 tomorrow after lunch

Next steps for me tomorrow are:

  *   integrate further inputs from you (references,KPIs)
  *   Alignment of high level objectives to key target outcomes
  *   Cut down up to 5 pages of content (candidate sections for this are 1.2 and 1.3) - any suggestions where by reviewers would be helpful!!!!

Thanks,
Alex

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