Hi Mirko, Find attached my proposed text for 2.1.1. point 8. I let you choose if you prefer to replace the existing one directly or combine it with my suggestions, I must confess I do not understand very well the original text :). I hope this helps, Nuria de Lama Research & Innovation ICT Program Manager Vice-Secretary General Big Data Value Association M +34 680645692 T +34 91214 9321 F +34 91754 3252 nuria.delama at atos.net<mailto:nuria.delama at atos.net> Albarracín 25 28037 Madrid Spain www.atosresearch.eu<http://www.atosresearch.eu/> es.atos.net [cid:image002.png at 01D19369.A586A950] Feel free to download our booklet at http://atos.net/en-us/home/we-are/insights-innovation/research-and-innovation.html From: fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org [mailto:fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org] On Behalf Of Mirko Presser Sent: Sunday, April 10, 2016 3:55 PM To: Mirko Presser; Sebastien Ziegler; Alex Gluhak; Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org Subject: [oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update Importance: High Dear all, A new update. Thanks for all your inputs. We are down to 14 pages for 2.1 but need to save 1 more page and improve a few more points. BRAM - please look at 2.1.1 point 5 - this can be much better: User acceptance validation addressing privacy, security, vulnerability, liability, identification of user needs, concerns and expectations of the IoT solutions. SEBASTIEN - please look at 2.1.1 point 6 - this needs to be aligned and referenced to section 2.2: Significant and measureable contribution to standards or pre-normative activities in the pilots' areas of action via the implementation of open platforms. MARGARIDA - please look at 2.1.1 point 7 - this needs some more specifics maybe - can you think of how to handle this? Can we provide things like save 1 hour time like the Helsinki text says? Improvement of citizens' quality of life, in the public and private spheres, in terms of autonomy, convenience and comfort, participatory approaches, health and lifestyle, and access to services. NURIA - please look at 2.1.1 point 8 - this can be improved with some material form FIWARE maybe?: Creation of opportunities for entrepreneurs by promoting new market openings, providing access to valuable datasets and direct interactions with users, expanding local businesses to European scale, etc. SERGIO - please look at 2.1.1 point 9 - this needs an industrial context. Development of secure and sustainable European IoT ecosystems and contribution to IoT infrastructures viable beyond the duration of the Pilot. Please run through the cities and shorten, sharpen the text. What is the IMPACT for the city. Eindhoven - REMCO Helsinki - ROOPE Porto - MARGARIDA Santander - LUIS Carouge - SEBASTIEN This is starting to look like a section. 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