[Fiware-pcc] Draft presentation for Luxembourg

[stefano de panfilis]

dear jose,

first very simple comments are mostly on slide 3 and 4.
in the sense that the word "services" should be somehow declinated. i
mean following the rest of the presentation people listening (...)
will understand that the services are not just those deliverd on a
laptop or smart phone, but this should (must) be clearly said!

something like "services for the every day life on whatever device"
should come out strongly! you can choose the best sentence your
marketing people will tell you.

may be some examples migth help, in fact only when you come to the
"help of the usage areas" the usage context migth become clearer, but
you have only one slide and the end of the presentation.

particularly for the attendees of luxembourg i suggest such changes.

my two cents ...

ciao,
stefano

p.s: there typos in the speach text, but of course these do not count.
isn't it? ... :-)

2011/5/26 JOSE JIMENEZ DELGADO <jimenez at tid.es>:
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> I have drafted a presentation for Fi_Ware project at the Luxembourg event
> http://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/77/luxembourg.pptx
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> I would be very grateful for any comments or suggestions
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