[Fiware-wpl] Architecture deliverable cross chapter aspects - quick review possibility

[Sandfuchs, Thorsten]

HI pier,
no Problemo - still in time and thank you a lot for the contribution. :)

I updated the diagram and could integrate it

I would not be in favour of one of the boxes to cross the chapters - I think this would draw too much attention to this box - I think the layout of the box in your chapter, aligned with the layout of the box in the cloud chapter should be enough.

Attached the final document in an v8 version - I will upload it accordingly until EOB tonight - so if anybody still wants to contribute... or can spot an error... feel free to step in.

Best,
                                                                /Thorsten

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From: Garino Pierangelo [mailto:pierangelo.garino at telecomitalia.it]
Sent: Mittwoch, 17. April 2013 10:48
To: Sandfuchs, Thorsten
Cc: fiware-wpl at lists.fi-ware.eu; fiware-wpa at lists.fi-ware.eu
Subject: R: [Fiware-wpl] Architecture deliverable cross chapter aspects - quick review possibility

Dear Thorsten,

I apologise I'm late to provide you an update proposal for the 'citymap' diagram in this section of the document (I was too much focused on the completion of specific peer reviews and other deliverable preparation, and I didn't properly manage this long standing item).

Would you just have a check to the modified diagram attached, where the modifications are as follows, and decide whether they can be adopted or not:

-          Modification of blocks in the 'Infrastructure' dotted box (lower side of the diagram)

-          Introduced the 'network Infrastructure Provider' actor

-          Aligned Cloud Proxy blocks in I2ND and Cloud modules (we would also be in favour of having a single Cloud Proxy block crossing I2ND and Cloud boxes, but this implies that also Alex has to agree before doing it).

Thanks and BR

Pier


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Oggetto: [Fiware-wpl] Architecture deliverable cross chapter aspects - quick review possibility


Dear colleagues,

obviously nobody did really take care of this, therefore I did it: finalizing and "docifying" the Architecture deliverable cross chapter parts and introducing the "real" cover of this deliverable. Find a  document attached which is generated.



Please take a close look at it will be the front part of the final deliverable and the reviewers will start reading this chapter.



If you think you can improve the text, please do so directly on the wiki at http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/FI-WARE_Architecture I will monitor the page and regenerate the document iff needed.



I as well updated the deliverable cockpit:

https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fi-ware-private/index.php/D.2.3.2.submission_cockpit#Progress_Tracking_and_Links_D.2.3.2_FI-WARE_Architecture


Document name

official
Deadline

Planned
submission

Deliverable Front Page Link

Link to generated .zip

related docx

2.3.2 FI-WARE Architecture

M21

05.04.2013

D.2.3.2 FI-WARE Architecture front page<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fi-ware-private/index.php/D.2.3.2_FI-WARE_Architecture_front_page>

generated: cover & cross chapter<https://130.206.80.126/deliverables/WP2/D232_WP2_v2_generated.zip> - will be consolidated by hand

submitted:




Best,

                                                                /Thorsten


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