[Fiware-wpl] please do a final review for submission of D10.5.2c

[Sandfuchs, Thorsten]

Dear colleagues,
please find the version that is ready for a final review (as it is generated from the fi-ware-review wiki) attached.

@fiware-wpl/wpa: as you know we plan to submit 10.5.2c a third time as requested by the reviewers - main changes were:

-          1 chapter touching on feedback solicitation

-          2 chapter touching on validation process description
Planned submission: Wednesday 30th of April, noon - please indicate if you want to veto this submission ASAP to stefano and me.

Further changes to the text should be persisted in the review wiki, linked from here:
                https://forge.fi-ware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fi-ware-review/index.php/D.10.5.2c.Report_on_Validation_process_including_Validation_with_Use_Case_projects_front_page

Best
                                                               /Thorsten

From: fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org<mailto:fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org> [mailto:fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org] On Behalf Of Sandfuchs, Thorsten
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Subject: [Fiware-testbed] resubmission of D10.5.2 (as D10.5.2c) validation report, third submission


Dear colleagues,

I prepared in the wiki https://forge.fi-ware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/testbed/index.php/D.10.5.2c.Report_on_Validation_process_including_Validation_with_Use_Case_projects_front_page and subsequent pages the delivery of the D.10.5.2c deliverable. Additionally attached as word.



Please review and input any comments and inclusions either with tracked-changes in doc or directly in the wiki.

Special emphasize should taken towards the new chapters 12 and 13 outlining the validation process refinements and the "feedback channel and GE requirement" description.



As well some spelling mistakes or strange sounding "german" phrase or rephrasing of passages would help already :)



The plan is to submit this deliverable ASAP as the reviewers requested delivery within one month after reception of the 6th review report.



Thanks for any contribution and best regards,



                                                               /Thorsten

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