[Fiware-apps] Internal review D.3.1.1 FI-WARE GE Open Specifications

[Sandfuchs, Thorsten]

Dear WP3-partners,

we would like to conduct an internal review of our own deliverable (as it probably will be submitted to the EC).



For this we compiled the deliverable in the DOCX format for you. You can download it here:

                https://sapmats-de.sap-ag.de/download/download.cgi?id=FDO0XAO5EZT9C2IINHD7Y66IZ3EACQM1EZ82JRGCV106X39ITK



Please have a close look on the layout and the content of your particular chapter or have general remarks.



Please check

1.       Is your OpenSpecification even part of the deliverable?

2.       Is all needed and desired text part of the deliverable?

3.       Do you see potential on improving your contribution content wise, if you take the content and structure of other open specifications in this deliverable into account

4.       Are there any layouting problems or issues with pictures or something else?



You can:

-          Use the standard word-review functionality in order to provide feedback or attach comments

-          You should not change the text of your own specifications within the document, rather use the wiki-link provided on the top of every-page and change the content _directly_ in the wiki (once the final deliverable will get generated, the content will be there)

-          We would (if you have major changes) recommend: You should change the text of partner contributions (where you see improvement possibilities) within the document and send the document to the responsible partner for inclusion in the wiki page



Thank you for your support and dedication to this topic.



Best regards,

                                                                              /Thorsten

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Thorsten Sandfuchs



SAP AG



SAP Research Center Karlsruhe



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www.sap.com





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