[Fiware-apps] FW: D2.6.3: Draft of APPS State of the Art Part for your opinion (not final)

[Heller, Markus]

Hi all,

Based on some feedback from coordinator to our state of the art submission from last week ("no changes since" not allowed, internal comments like "no contribution from XY" to be deleted, does not read like a state of the art report, not seen as 1 text but only several text fragments), I have now significantly reworked the APPS State of the Art contribution today after my vacation.

I have sent it now to Miguel first to ask him for his opinion on his improvement.

In the meantime and not to waste time:

I now send you as prescreening the draft (not final). Besides the more state of the art look/fell now it is now condensed to 4 pages text (plus citations). If possible, given the drastic improvements since last version I would like to refrain from trying to further condense it - since we in Apps are "desperately heterogeneous" in state of the art and far from homogeneous etc...

Please notice that for the changes I have pretty much changed every sentence. Check that you and your work is still  correctly reported (and forgive some extras or context changes if you can :)).

@ALL: Please check the WORD attached ASAP and report to me every comment/correction you have (send WORD then) or please state per mail that you are OK. Please in any case mail to me.

Deadline: tomorrow morning (19.03.)

Best wishes
Markus

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