Miguel -- thanks for the detailed review and the comments. Team -- please, apply changes based on Miguel's comments below. Thanks, Alex From: Miguel Carrillo <mcp at tid.es> To: Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM at IBMIL Cc: JUAN JOSE HIERRO SUREDA <jhierro at tid.es> Date: 02/11/2011 07:07 PM Subject: Materializing Cloud Hosting in FI-WARE Dear Alex , I am sending private emails to all WPLs with further comments to the " Materializing Cloud Hosting in FI-WARE" section on the wiki. There are general comments (applicable to most WPs) and other that apply to your WP in particular. We have prepared a simple and friendly tutorial to make sure that we go in the same direction (http://tinyurl.com/6gueb5t) . General comments (for all WPs) ============================================================= Still there are heterogeneous templates for assets. Take Samson and Hadoop as the reference templates for assets IPRs in Assets are very frequently expressed in a vague manner. ?This product has IPR associated to it?, ?Open source?? To end with this situation change all assets and put this: Assets with patents/IPRs. Use this text: "This product will be licensed under FRAND (Fair Reasonable and Non-Discriminatory) Terms according to pre-requisites of the FI-PPP program". If needed, you can add sentences like the one in SAMSON ("Licensing of the software under an Open Source license is currently under consideration. ") Open source: see Hadoop and use it as template. The text is: "This product is licensed under the open source XXX" where "xxx" will be replaced with the license that applies and a link to the detailed terms where possible. If you rephrase this or use variants it's ok as long as the additions are properly explained. Programming Artefacts. I see that this is frequently removed. This is part of the template, it is mandatory and has to stay there. I am not sure if everyone is understanding this. This field elaborates on what we are providing to a developer(an API?, a tool? ... ) Delete empty sections. I see many blocks of "Themes", "Features" and "User Stories" (for instance) that are empty. This gives a poor impression and will cause trouble in the review. Please remove blank sections, they will have to be re-created when the first entry is added to the wiki Particular comments (specific to your WP) ============================================================= If I say "ok" to one of them, do not relax. It means that there is no particular remark. But the general comments still apply to it and it may need changes. 1) COMMENTS ON ASSETS IaaS Data Center Resource Management Crowbar ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template xCAT T ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template OpenStack Nova ? template ignored System Pools ? wrong template (it not an ?open source assets coming from third parties?). It needs the long template. ISAAC ? wrong template (it not an ?open source assets coming from third parties?). It needs the long template. RESERVOIR ? not compliant with the template. Some sections are empty with an ?TBD?. Trusted Compute Pools ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template Open Cloud Computing Interface (OCCI) ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template OpenStack Glance ? template ignored OpenStack Quantum ? template ignored Open vSwitch ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template IaaS Service Management JBoss ? ok MySQL ? ok Claudia ? ok PaaS Management Apache Tomcat - ok PostgreSQL- ok Ruby- ok RubyGem- ok Chef- ok PaaS Management Platform- ok Baseline Assets OpenStack Swift? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template Self-Service Interfaces Apache Tomcat ? ok MySQL ? ok HTML ? direct link to wikipedia. If it is explicitly an asset, it must have a wiki page that has to be compliant with the template CSS ? direct link to wikipedia. If it is explicitly an asset, it must have a wiki page that has to be compliant with the template Ruby on Rails ? direct link to wikipedia. If it is explicitly an asset, it must have a wiki page that has to be compliant with the template Cloud Proxy Nada Management Framework - ?NMF has no IPR associated to it? is very poor. Possibly this means that it is Open Source under a license such as Creative Commons, or alternatively something like the text in https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Ruby Monitoring collectd - ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template RabbitMQ ? I suspect that this qualifies as ?open source assets coming from third parties? in which case this has to use the short template, not this. ?Drools <- Fernando? ? - we must remove these informal remarks. This refers to an empty page with a template that is wrong Esper ? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template Graphite? ?Programming artifacts? must be removed. This is not compliant with the template Security OpenStack Keystone - not compliant with the template (I assume the righ one is the short one in this case) 2) COMMENTS ON BACKLOG I will send you this first thing in the morning Please make sure that this is properly looked at by all the concerned members of the WP under your supervision. Deadline: Friday, 4 EOB. Thanks for your cooperation Miguel -- ---------------------------------------------------------------------- _/ _/_/ Miguel Carrillo Pacheco _/ _/ _/ _/ Telefónica Distrito C _/ _/_/_/ _/ _/ Investigación y Edifico Oeste 1, Planta 5 _/ _/ _/ _/ Desarrollo Ronda de la Comunicación S/N _/ _/_/ Madrid 28050 (Spain) Tel: (+34) 91 483 26 77 e-mail: mcp at tid.es ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Este mensaje se dirige exclusivamente a su destinatario. Puede consultar nuestra política de envío y recepción de correo electrónico en el enlace situado más abajo. This message is intended exclusively for its addressee. We only send and receive email on the basis of the terms set out at. http://www.tid.es/ES/PAGINAS/disclaimer.aspx -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/old-fiware-cloud/attachments/20111102/ec5e5ab0/attachment.html>
You can get more information about our cookies and privacy policies clicking on the following links: Privacy policy Cookies policy