[Fiware-data] FW: FI-WARE Architecture Data final

[SERGIO GARCIA GOMEZ]

Hi all,
As you may know, yesterday we delivered both the architecture and the open specs of the chapter. The final review of the architecture (part of both documents), was finally reviewed by Juanjo. Several changes have been introduced in the document, now we need to synchronize the wiki. Please, open the document with comments at
https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/2467/D.2.3.2+FI-WARE+Architecture+-+Data+v7_with_comments.docx

and update the public wiki with the changes in the document. If you don't agree with any change, please let me know.
As soon as you finish, let me know.
Best Regards,
Sergio.

From: JUAN JOSE HIERRO SUREDA
Sent: Monday, May 27, 2013 6:49 AM
To: SERGIO GARCIA GOMEZ
Cc: JUAN JOSE HIERRO SUREDA
Subject: FI-WARE Architecture Data final

Hi Sergio,

  I'm sending to you the final version of your chapter's contribution to the FI-WARE Architecture deliverable.

  You can download it from the following URL (note that this file is publicly available):
https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/2466/D.2.3.2+FI-WARE+Architecture+-+Data+vfinal.docx

  There were many issues dealing with level of headings.   All of them where revealed as a result of the automated generation of the .docx files.   I have also introduced many changes targeted to improve readability.   Last but not least, I have carried out a final grammar spelling and detected many errors.   You can check all these changes because they are highlighted in the file you can download from the following URL (note that this file is private):
https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/2467/D.2.3.2+FI-WARE+Architecture+-+Data+v7_with_comments.docx

  Please share the results of this review with your chapter team and update the wiki as soon as possible in order to reflect these changes.   Note that this is not strictly urgent, but the sooner the better.   If there is any change that you or anyone of your team believes is not appropriate, I would like to know.   I honestly believe that all of them were suitable, that's why we will submit the contents as final contents of the FI-WARE Architecture deliverable to avoid delaying it further.   If we found there was any change that was wrong, we can fix it later.   After all, what really matters is that the version of the FI-WARE documentation available at the time the FI-WARE Open Innovation Lab will be launched be accurate and of the highest quality.

  Best regards,



-- Juanjo



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