[Fiware-i2nd] Update of I2ND wiki pages according to Peer review feedback

Garino Pierangelo pierangelo.garino at telecomitalia.it
Wed Sep 5 11:52:11 CEST 2012


Dear All,

the peer review of wiki pages concerning Architecture and Open Specs of I2ND chapter is attached to this mail.
Please have a look at the comments there (in general, yellow text means grammar/typo/etc, green text concerns contents).
In order to start doing the necessary update to the pages, I kindly ask the GE owners (i.e. Task coords) to take in charge the update of those pages concerning their GE, either directly or appointing other team members to do it. I'll personally take in charge the revision of the initial I2ND architecture page (i.e. https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Interface_to_Networks_and_Devices_%28I2ND%29_Architecture )

Due to the relatively short list of comments, I assume we can complete the update by Friday 7th, as planned by the WPL/WPA coordination meeting. Please let me know if you envisage troubles in doing this.

BR
Pier




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