[Fiware-i2nd] Updates to I2ND Open Specs after peer review

Garino Pierangelo pierangelo.garino at telecomitalia.it
Tue Mar 4 16:18:02 CET 2014


Dear API Open Specs providers,
the Open Specs review has been delivered by the Cloud Hosting chapter, there are mainly minor modifications required, plus a couple of more consistent ones.

I'll personally take care of the recurring comment about the 'API change history' table formatting, by aligning all the tables in the document to the mostly used format in the other chapters. So please don't touch the 'API change history table' in all sections, except for those listed below (if necessary).

Besides the tables mentioned above, I have already introduced comments and updates in the document; however, for all the other comments by the reviewer I need your support (hope I have matched correctly the name of updating persons with the API); I report below the main items I found to be updated:

-          Review of comments in Section 7 Distributed Compute API Specification --> Chris

-          10.1.2   API Change History: is it latest version? --> Chris

-          Update of Section 15.1.2 NetIC_Restful_API_1 API Core --> Thomas

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-          Comment at Section 17.6 Main interactions (see page 256) --> Simon

-          Section 23.2.2   Architecture: picture should be represented as FMC diagram (or along with it) --> Marius

-          Section 23.1 Introduction of  Network Positioning Enabler API Specification: Legal notice link not correct, it should be either of these two: --> Sandro(/Matthias)

o   FI-WARE Open Specification Legal Notice (essential patents license)<http://forge.fi-ware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/FI-WARE_Open_Specification_Legal_Notice_%28essential_patents_license%29>

o   FI-WARE Open Specification Legal Notice (implicit patents license)<http://forge.fi-ware.org/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/FI-WARE_Open_Specification_Legal_Notice_%28implicit_patents_license%29>

o   Please select which it will be

o   Section Architecture (still same API): a FMC diagram should be introduced, maybe along with the picture --> Sandro

-          Main update: 'EPC Network Services API Specification (PRELIMINARY)' at Section 26. --> Marius

o   Is this an actual API in the current release?

o   Page name should not be (preliminary) any more (but this can be done by Pier after document update)

You are kindly asked to do your modifications directly in the MSWord file enclosed with track changes activated (later the modifications will be replicated in the wiki pages); please provide me your modifications by Wednesday 5th March, EOB, thanks.

Additionally, I kindly ask Thomas, Chris, Henk and Hans/Matthias to review the whole document (especially the GE they are responsible for), and provide any further update if required (please tell me if you did it).


Many thanks and BR
Pier


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