* "Assets in common with previous entries on the page. The “…” after Sensei hints that there are missing assets (or text)! Haven’t we identified them by now? - we don't understand"
If I see "Sensei ..." in several places, as a reader I understand that something is missing here. And my interpretation is that either someone is going to add more assets after Sensei or that someone is going to add more text about this one. In any case, it gives the impression that it is temporary and there's work ongoing. We have to close it and leave it a stable state for now.
Regards,
Miguel
El 03/11/2011 13:33, Farkas, Lorant (NSN - HU/Budapest) escribió:
FYI, my own comments in bold green/red.
Br,
Lorant
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From: ext Miguel Carrillo [mailto:mcp at tid.es]
Sent: Wednesday, November 02, 2011 6:16 PM
To: thierry.nagellen at orange.com<mailto:thierry.nagellen at orange.com>; Farkas, Lorant (NSN - HU/Budapest)
Cc: JUAN JOSE HIERRO SUREDA
Subject: Materializing Internet of Things (IoT) Services Enablement in FI-WARE
Dear Thierry & Lorant,
I am sending private emails to all WPLs with further comments to the "Materializing Internet of Things (IoT) Services Enablement in FI-WARE<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE>" section on the wiki. There are general comments (applicable to most WPs) and other that apply to your WP in particular. We have prepared a simple and friendly tutorial to make sure that we go in the same direction (http://tinyurl.com/6gueb5t) .
My general impression is that we are a bit lagging behind in this chapter and that efforts will have to be made to reach deadlines with enough quality to undergo a review.
General comments (for all WPs)
=============================================================
* Still there are heterogeneous templates for assets. Take Samson<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/SAMSON_Platform> and Hadoop<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Hadoop> as the reference templates for assets
* IPRs in Assets are very frequently expressed in a vague manner. “This product has IPR associated to it”, “Open source”… To end with this situation change all assets and put this:
* Assets with patents/IPRs. Use this text: "This product will be licensed under FRAND (Fair Reasonable and Non-Discriminatory<http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fair,_reasonable,_and_non-discriminatory_terms>) Terms according to pre-requisites of the FI-PPP program".
* If needed, you can add sentences like the one in SAMSON ("Licensing of the software under an Open Source license is currently under consideration. ")
* Open source: see Hadoop <http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Hadoop> and use it as template. The text is: "This product is licensed under the open source XXX" where "xxx" will be replaced with the license that applies and a link to the detailed terms where possible.
* If you rephrase this or use variants it's ok as long as the additions are properly explained.
* Programming Artefacts. I see that this is frequently removed. This is part of the template, it is mandatory and has to stay there. I am not sure if everyone is understanding this. This field elaborates on what we are providing to a developer(an API?, a tool? ... )
* Delete empty sections. I see many blocks of "Themes", "Features" and "User Stories" (for instance) that are empty. This gives a poor impression and will cause trouble in the review. Please remove blank sections, they will have to be re-created when the first entry is added to the wiki
Particular comments (specific to your WP)
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If I say "ok" to one of them, do not relax. It means that there is no particular remark. But the general comments still apply to it and it may need changes.
1) COMMENTS ON ASSETS
* IoT Communications/Connectivity Management<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Communications.2FConnectivity_Management>
* Cumulocity<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Cumulocity> – “Programming artifacts” empty - done
* FossTrak<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/FossTrak> –The page is virtually empty and it does not follow the template. - Thierry!!! please fill the asset description according to template
* IoT Communications/Service Control<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Communications.2FService_Control>
* Cumulocity<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Cumulocity> – same as before - done
* FossTrak<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/FossTrak> – same as before - Thierry!!! please fill the asset description according to template
* IoT Communications/Device Frontend<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Communications.2FDevice_Frontend>
* No assets! - done
* IoT Resource Management/Services and Resources Interaction<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Resource_Management.2FServices_and_Resources_Interaction>
* IDAS<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/IDAS> – “Programming artifacts” empty - Ricardo!!! please fill artifacts according to template
* Cumulocity<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Cumulocity> – same as before - done
* Fosstrak<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php?title=Fosstrak&action=edit&redlink=1> – same as before - Thierry!!! please fill the asset description according to template
* ISIS<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php?title=ISIS&action=edit&redlink=1> – incomplete and the parts with text are very poorly populated - Ernö or Martin !!! please fill the asset description according to template
* IoT-A<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php?title=IoT-A&action=edit&redlink=1> ... – empty - Ricardo !!! please fill the asset description according to template
* SOL<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Atos_SOL> – “Publicly available documentation - TBD” - Maarten !!! please fill the asset description according to template
* Sensei<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Sensei> – “Technologies used” empty - Ernö/Martin !!! please fill the asset description according to template
* IoT Resource Management/Discovery and Resolution of Things<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Resource_Management.2FDiscovery_and_Resolution_of_Things>
* IoT-A - same as before
* SOL<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Atos_SOL> – same as before
* Sensei<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Sensei> – same as before
* IoT Data Handling/Local Storage<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Data_Handling.2FLocal_Storage>
* Assets in common with previous entries on the page. The “…” after Sensei hints that there are missing assets or text! Haven’t we identified them by now? - Ernö/Martin !!! Please provide short description in the main page as well
* IoT Data Handling/Data Pooling<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Data_Handling.2FData_Pooling>
* Assets in common with previous entries on the page. The “…” after Sensei hints that there are missing assets or text! Haven’t we identified them by now?
*
* IoT Data Handling/Data Access Policy<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Data_Handling.2FData_Access_Policy>
* Assets in common with previous entries on the page. - Thierry!!!
* IoT Data Handling/Data Handling<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Data_Handling.2FData_Handling>
* Assets in common with previous entries on the page. The “…” after Sensei hints that there are missing assets (or text)! Haven’t we identified them by now? - we don't understand
* IoT Process Automation/Template Handlers<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Process_Automation.2FTemplate_Handlers>
* No assets! - done
* IoT Process Automation/Semantic<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Process_Automation.2FSemantic>
* No assets! - done
* IoT Process Automation/Exposure<http://forge.fi-ware.eu/plugins/mediawiki/wiki/fiware/index.php/Materializing_Internet_of_Things_%28IoT%29_Services_Enablement_in_FI-WARE#IoT_Process_Automation.2FExposure>
* No assets! Very immature, not worked on. Ernö/Martin !!! Stephan !!! Please fill the asset description according to templates
2) COMMENTS ON BACKLOG
* I will send you this first thing in the morning
Please make sure that this is properly looked at by all the concerned members of the WP under your supervision.
Deadline: Friday, 4 EOB.
Thanks for your cooperation
Miguel
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