[Fiware-iot] FW: Review of more deliverables

[Farkas, Lorant (NSN - HU/Budapest)]

Dear All,

 

FYI, no particular issue in our chapter for these 2 deliverables, from a "formal" perspective.

 

Thanks & Br,

 

Lorant

 

 

From: ext Miguel Carrillo [mailto:mcp at tid.es] 
Sent: Wednesday, July 25, 2012 8:06 PM
To: Farkas, Lorant (NSN - HU/Budapest); thierry.nagellen at orange.com
Cc: JUAN JOSE HIERRO SUREDA
Subject: Review of more deliverables

 

Dear Lorant & Thierry,

This is my review for the Instal & Admin l manual and also for the User and Programmer's manual. The problematic things are marked in light blue. Please be aware that you have a very short time to react so let your partners know ASAP.

A few comments:

*	Things to be addressed are highlighted in blue. 

*	Note that my review is "formal" (formats, structure, consistency, reasonable aspect) but the coordination (Juanjo) may add comments of a more technical nature afterwards. So an "ok" from me does not necessarily means a final approval by the project coordination. 

*	General comment for all WPs:  there are many GEs in some  WP with an "Installation and Administration Guide" that is an installation manual only. Giving the need to deliver at once, we will not try to fix it immediately. After the delivery we will provide a deadline to address it and provide the administration part. Of course, the impact on the cost reporting could be affected by this. 

*	This applies to part of the WPs only. The case of the Install and Admin Guides of GEs offered as a Service of nature PP the partner has to provide proper guides (what is needed by the administrator of the machine where it is running at your company ). This will given to the EC upon request and it will protected somehow (account/password, IP filtering, ...).  In the deliverables at the end of the month we will provide simply a text stating that.  We would give the manuals+binaries afterwards and only if they ask for it.

 
I'd appreciate it if you could confirm what GEs are going to be provided as a Service (not to install on the testbed) in July. Theoretically this is in the testbed wiki but things change too fast and I prefer to ask you.

Best regards,

Miguel





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