[Fiware-iot] AP after peer reviews

[t.elsaleh at surrey.ac.uk]

Hello Fermin, Tobias

I've attached a doc containing only the section that USURREY is involved in i.e. Discovery Engine.

This addresses comments PG 18-23.

Best regards,
Tarek

Centre for Communication Systems Research (CCSR)
Organisers and hosts of European Wireless 2013 - www.EW2013.org<http://www.EW2013.org>



From: Fermín Galán Márquez [mailto:fermin at tid.es]
Sent: 02 November 2012 14:27
To: Elsaleh T Mr (Electronic Eng)
Cc: Tobias.Jacobs at neclab.eu; jhierro at tid.es; fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu
Subject: Re: [Fiware-iot] AP after peer reviews

Dear Tarek,

I've recently joined to TID's FI-WARE team and this is also under my scope

So:

"Or Juanjo/Ken?" -> "Juanjo/Ken/Fermín [me]"

Thanks!

Best regards,

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Fermín

El 02/11/2012 12:31, t.elsaleh at surrey.ac.uk<mailto:t.elsaleh at surrey.ac.uk> escribió:
Hello Tobias,

Ok, well the main editors for this GE document are NEC and TID. In this case should I just send the corrections to you? Or Juanjo/Ken?

Best regards,
Tarek



From: Tobias Jacobs [mailto:Tobias.Jacobs at neclab.eu]
Sent: 02 November 2012 08:00
To: Elsaleh T Mr (Electronic Eng); jhierro at tid.es<mailto:jhierro at tid.es>
Cc: fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu>; thierry.nagellen at orange.com<mailto:thierry.nagellen at orange.com>
Subject: RE: AP after peer reviews

Hi Tarek,

Sorry for the late answer; we had a public holiday here yesterday.
As far as I understand the corrections are supposed to be implemented in the original wiki pages the doc has been created from.
Maybe you could mark in the review doc which comments you addressed and send that to the other GE contributors.

Best
Tobias

From: t.elsaleh at surrey.ac.uk<mailto:t.elsaleh at surrey.ac.uk> [mailto:t.elsaleh at surrey.ac.uk]
Sent: Mittwoch, 31. Oktober 2012 17:09
To: Tobias Jacobs; jhierro at tid.es<mailto:jhierro at tid.es>
Cc: fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu>; thierry.nagellen at orange.com<mailto:thierry.nagellen at orange.com>
Subject: RE: AP after peer reviews

Hello Tobias, Juanjo,

RE: FI-WARE IoT Backend Things Management GE Open Specification (FI-WARE-2012-10-01)

I have gone through the comments by the reviewer with regards to the USurrey's section on the Discovery Engine.

As editors for the Document, I would like to ask how to go about putting the corrections for the document. Shall I just email it to you or is there somehow to upload the corrections?

Best regards,
Tarek

From: fiware-iot-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-iot-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu> [mailto:fiware-iot-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] On Behalf Of thierry.nagellen at orange.com<mailto:thierry.nagellen at orange.com>
Sent: 30 October 2012 15:42
To: fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu>
Subject: [Fiware-iot] AP after peer reviews

Dear all,

I sent separately some emails to some of you who have more concrete actions to do regarding the peer reviews we received from I2ND colleagues. We have currently a WPL/WPA meeting and the deadline for improvement is next Monday morning (5th of November).
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AqGGeaQGro3fdDZhTEVmYTlHenkyR0FHMTg3LUVpSWc#gid=0
If it seems we have lots of to do, I think that some inconsistencies are really pointed out and many external links especially for standards are missing (as we are using them every day they seem explicit but not really for external people)
Be careful also on relationships with external GEs from the other chapters (typically PubSub broker) we need sometimes to be more explicit on the potential link/interface but maintain also consistency with their names/description. This is an additional work we have to do because the other do not explain how they expect to interact with other GEs but it is also part of the added value we (IoT chapter) provide to Fi-Ware being fully include in the whole architecture.

Thanks for your support.
Thierry Nagellen
Program Manager Future Internet
Orange Labs Networks & Carriers
905 rue Albert Einstein
06921 Sophia Antipolis Cedex
+33 492 94 52 84
+33 679 85 08 44


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