[old-Fiware-security] FI-WARE - Progress Report D2.1.6 - WP8 Progress Report

[Franz-Stefan Preiss]

Dear Pascal,

thanks for preparing the progress report.

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1) Can you confirm that it covers the reporting period M25 - M36 (and 
possibly beyond).
This is because for IBM, the individually reported progress items cover 
M25 until M36, and no progress before M25.

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2) Please incorporate the following content changes (also reported by 
Robert)

"M31->End  (i.e. M36 for NSN, SAP, IBM, DT & INRIA who decided to close 
their work on M36 and M44 for Thales, Atos and FT who decided to continue 
the work on activities as per project extension)" --> M31->End  (i.e. M36 
for NSN, SAP, IBM, DT & INRIA who finished their work as originally 
planned, and M44 for Thales, Atos and FT who continued their work as part 
of a project extension)

3) ----------------------------
Because of seemingly broken indentation, the individual partners' progress 
is very difficult to read and also takes much more space than necessary. 
In particular, the progress of IBM is very difficult to read, but this 
applies to other partners too. Can you please correct the formatting such 
that the individual bullet points start at the beginning of a line, rather 
than the middle of the line. 

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4) Here some minor grammatical changes that should be incorporated:

"and let the tasks  leads" --> and let the task leaders
"share information especially information" --> add a comma or full stop 
after share information
"Technical Coordination and important" --> Technical Coordination and it 
is important
"to keep aligned WP8" --> to keep WP8 aligned
"planning has could be changed due" --> ??? do you mean 'planning had to 
be changed'?

Thank you.

Best Regards,
Franz-Stefan

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Dr. Franz-Stefan Preiss
IBM Research Zurich
Säumerstrasse 4, CH-8803 Rüschlikon, Switzerland
+41 44 724 8401
frp at zurich.ibm.com
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From:   BISSON Pascal <pascal.bisson at thalesgroup.com>
To:     "old-fiware-security at lists.fi-ware.org" 
<old-fiware-security at lists.fi-ware.org>, "Seidl, Robert (NSN - DE/Munich)" 
<robert.seidl at nsn.com>, "Meyer, Gerald (NSN - DE/Munich) 
(gerald.meyer at nsn.com)" <gerald.meyer at nsn.com>, 
"Wolfgang.Steigerwald at telekom.de" <Wolfgang.Steigerwald at telekom.de>, 
"'AGHINA Xavier IMT/OLPS'" <xavier.aghina at orange.com>, Susana Gonzalez 
Zarzosa <susana.gzarzosa at atos.net>, EGAN Richard 
<Richard.Egan at uk.thalesgroup.com>, AGUESSY Francois-Xavier 
<francois-xavier.aguessy at thalesgroup.com>, CAO Phong 
<phong.cao at thalesgroup.com>, DANGERVILLE Cyril 
<cyril.dangerville at thalesgroup.com>, "'TRABELSI, Slim'" 
<slim.trabelsi at sap.com>, "DI CERBO, Francesco" 
<francesco.di.cerbo at sap.com>, "'Franz-Stefan Preiss'" 
<FRP at zurich.ibm.com>, "Abdelkader Lahmadi (abdelkader.lahmadi at inria.fr)" 
<abdelkader.lahmadi at inria.fr>, "Remi Badonnel (remi.badonnel at loria.fr)" 
<remi.badonnel at loria.fr>, HAINES Sarah <Sarah.HAINES at uk.thalesgroup.com>
Cc:     BISSON Pascal <pascal.bisson at thalesgroup.com>, BETTAN Olivier 
<olivier.bettan at thalesgroup.com>
Date:   04.02.2015 09:41
Subject:        FI-WARE - Progress Report D2.1.6 - WP8 Progress Report



Dear Colleagues,
 
First draft of progress report with all inputs  (except ORANGE )  has now 
been uploaded and is available for your review also suggested 
changes/improvements at:
 
WP8: 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D2QVAGnEVkfhjZUmli2PS4i8051b8fPMoCAs5BFrEYg 

 
 
So counting on :
 
1)      Xavier to URGENTLY send me  its input (since the only one 
missing!) – also to prepare some statement regarding what did happen with 
Botnet Tracking in R3 as per note added when we delivered (this would be 
for sure questioned by the EC – As such Xavier please prepare your best 
answer …
2)      Each and every of you to check I properly integrate your input 
also send me your suggested changes to further improve
 
Thanks in advance for your cooperation and support.
 
Hearing from you.
 
As for the rest keep you posted 
 
Best Regards,
Pascal
 
[@@ THALES GROUP INTERNAL @@]
 

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