Dear Juanjo, All, here the final version, after an internal check of respective WPs (partners explicitly approving are listed in the filename). If agreed with the changes, you can simply accept all and remove comments. Best, A. Il 14/05/2013 03:11, Juanjo Hierro ha scritto: > Dear Davide and Andrea, > > Please find enclosed the revised versions of the WP9 and WP10 > description forms with all the changes I believe would be needed to make > it clear the goals and scope of activities in both WPs. > > The WP10 is actually the same I already sent to you last week. I > have reviewed once again and I believe it doesn't require additional > changes to the ones I originally proposed. I understood that the > proposed changes were ok for you but just wanted to double-check. > > In the reviewed WP9, I would say that the changes mostly clarify the > scope and goals. I believe that the scope of activities in task 9.1 > was rather hard to understand in the existing version. I hope you will > agree with most (if not all) of the changes. The rest of changes in > 9.2 and 9.3 are minor. > > Please come back to us with a final revised version during today > (tuesday) so that we can submit by the evening a version of the DoW for > final approval by our deputy PO, Ragnar Bergstrom. > > Please don't accept the changes you agree with since we will have to > submit the WPs with changes highlighted to our PO. Just modify or add > new changes if you don't agree with them or consider them not > sufficient. Then return back the resulting final version. We will > consider that those changes we have proposed that remain in the returned > WP description forms are there because they were ok for you. > > Best regards, > > -- Juanjo > > ------------- > Product Development and Innovation (PDI) - Telefonica Digital > website: www.tid.es > email: jhierro at tid.es > twitter: twitter.com/JuanjoHierro > > FI-WARE (European Future Internet Core Platform) Coordinator > and Chief Architect > > You can follow FI-WARE at: > website: http://www.fi-ware.eu > facebook: http://www.facebook.com/pages/FI-WARE/251366491587242 > twitter: http://twitter.com/FIware > linkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/groups/FIWARE-4239932 > > > ________________________________ > > Este mensaje se dirige exclusivamente a su destinatario. Puede > consultar nuestra política de envío y recepción de correo electrónico > en el enlace situado más abajo. > This message is intended exclusively for its addressee. We only send > and receive email on the basis of the terms set out at: > http://www.tid.es/ES/PAGINAS/disclaimer.aspx -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: WP10 description in FI-WARE-DoW-Amendment4 - v3 (version_date-13-05-02)-IBM-ENG approved.docx Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document Size: 86479 bytes Desc: not available URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/old-fiware-testbed/attachments/20130514/0f25ca2b/attachment.docx> -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: WP9 description in FI-WARE-DoW-Amendment4 - v3 (version_date-13-05-14).SAP-ATOS-UPM-IBM-ENG approved.docx Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document Size: 78619 bytes Desc: not available URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/old-fiware-testbed/attachments/20130514/0f25ca2b/attachment-0001.docx>
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