Hi all, Here is my review. More comments up to you to integrate some changes and some small changes in the text. What about the Outsmart evaluation? If it is required I can do it but only during the week end :(. BR Thierry De : fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu [mailto:fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] De la part de Garino Pierangelo Envoyé : jeudi 14 novembre 2013 23:16 À : Sandfuchs, Thorsten Cc : Juanjo Hierro; fiware-wpl at lists.fi-ware.eu; fiware-wpa at lists.fi-ware.eu; fiware-testbed at lists.fi-ware.eu Objet : [Fiware-testbed] R: D.10.5.2b validation analysis and report ready for review within the next business day Dear Thorsten, here is a version of the document with few minor comments and adjustments from my side (I accepted all changes before introducing mine). Overall the document looks good, considering that the main concern is due to the limited amount of feedback received (i.e. few enablers actually validated); in my view better results couldn't be obtained with such a limited material to manage. I didn't provide answers to the main questions you raise in the doc, as I don't feel to have sufficient elements to draw specific conclusions. I wonder if there's the need to mention somewhere in the doc that I2ND GEs were not validated (except Cloud Proxy in conjunction with Cloud) as they were planned for R2 only. BR Pier Da: fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu> [mailto:fiware-testbed-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] Per conto di Sandfuchs, Thorsten Inviato: mercoledì 13 novembre 2013 19:47 A: stefano de panfilis; fiware-testbed at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-testbed at lists.fi-ware.eu>; Juanjo Hierro Cc: fiware-wpl at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-wpl at lists.fi-ware.eu>; fiware-wpa at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-wpa at lists.fi-ware.eu> Oggetto: [Fiware-testbed] D.10.5.2b validation analysis and report ready for review within the next business day Dear colleagues, please find the current version of the D.10.5.2b deliverable for your consideration and review (you have one business day). The latest changes I introduced are yet to be dully synced with the wiki, but this I will do tomorrow prior to final compilation. Of the deliverable on Friday. Please provide your feedback, comments or direct changes (please use the track-changes functionality!!) in the word version directly and send it back to me. What is open? - Especially for FI-WARE project management some more verbose information is highly needed e.g. in chapter FI-WARE level analysis (chapter 3.3). What did we draw out of the validation in this respect and how do we address the identified challenges? What was perceived good by fi-ware? - OUTSMART use case analysis is still missing - I will add some further and more details on the chapter 11 "validation methodology" - Review by all of the interested parties Additionally we need a fresh minded review of the deliverable and judgment whether we present the FI-WARE project "good enough" and actually to the high level, that we actually reached so far. Please take this seriously as I would imagine that this report might be considered for the next review as well in relation to GO or NO-GO decisions of your Generic Enablers! 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