[Fiware-testbed] d10.3.1 reviewed by tid

[stefano de panfilis]

dear all,

please find forwarded the email from miguel with comments to the last
version is sent for submission (here also attached with comments from
miguel in track-change mode).

please provide your comments/review by today e.o.b so we can finally
comment them tomorrow in our weekly phc. (10:00 ....).

ciao,
stefano

---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Miguel Carrillo <mcp at tid.es>
Date: 2014-04-30 21:37 GMT+02:00
Subject: Re: STEFANO: Partners leaving on M36
To: stefano de panfilis <stefano.depanfilis at eng.it>
Cc: JUAN JOSE HIERRO SUREDA <jhierro at tid.es>


 Hi Stefano,

Thanks for all the efforts so far

I checked this one and added changes (tracked) and also some comments to
address. It is attached.

But I have to add the most important comment. FI-Lab is now Seville+Trento
+ ... and this document speaks about Seville and makes a short mention to
the others. We must take the  opportunity to reinforce the message of the
FI-WARE/FI-Ops/FI-Lab ecosystem.

I would ask to create a* dedicated section*. It does not have to be long
but meaningful  in fact, Juanjo specifically asked me not to elaborate too
much. As coordinator of the PPP in Engineering (and you are in XiFi),
explaining this  shoud be easy for you. Juanjo insisted that we do not have
to reuse text from XiFi or sell things that could be part of XiFi. We
cannot give the impression that we are trying to sell things created with
effort from the others, Juanjo insisted a lot on this. And we just created
one node, the only node created by FI-WARE is just the Spanish one,
actually.

The key points are:
*  to tell the strategy  FI-Labs/FI-Ops and how well we are getting on with
XIFi, we are part of something bigger than us. We tend to  a federated
environment and the present deliverable describes specifically the node
that was created with the resources for FI-WARE - just the effort, because
not a single penny of FI-WARE was put in buying the machines. This could be
done in one single paragraph
* to provide pointers to XIFi where further info can be got. Examples:

   - D5.2  Report on XIFI Core Backbone Deployment - see where this one is
   located, I believe it is public
   - http://wiki.fi-xifi.eu/Main_Page
   - I am sure that you can find the most relevant ones. You can eve
   provide references to future deliverables (XiFi will provide further info
   on xxx in deliverable xxx)

See if you can address this and we can check again on Monday (or later if
it takes more, I hope not)
 Thanks,

Miguel



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