[Token-all] [Token] On D6.1. progree

[Carlo Harpes]

Dear contributors,

Let me introduce Benjamin, in cc, who assists me in revieing the Token documents.

I review the input to D6.1 that has to be delivered next week, and which should be ready for final review tomorrow.
Here my feedback:


  1.  I deleted some suggested inputs from the project description that have not been updated, to clean the doc. That's why I renamed the document to v0.2.1 so that you still call copied it back from the previous version. Please continue now on this version (and never on those I moved to the _old folder.



  1.  Nobody added his name to the list of contributors. As such you may have an issue when audited and when report work in the WP if you did not contribute to the result. Please update before tomorrow.


  1.  On 3.1: Please clarify what are the current answer, do not only give the method, but evidence that you really applied it.


  1.  Many contributors (including me do not succeed) to number correctly on this Google suite. That's why it is necessaire that the coordinator asks a document manager to revise and correct this. If it had been my decision, I would have required to work on a good Word template, and then I could have done myself the proof-reading and the quality review. You should start this process now.



  1.  We are inconsistent in using cap in titles (My suggestion: replace by Lowecade lattres exc when using Acronyms, during our proof-reading (please confirm).


  1.  There are still too many "will" for work that in theory is already done. I corrected many, and will continue tomorrow late afternoon. But there will be some left for Stefanos's review.


  1.  We started to review the innovation radar, and then I will update ch 4 (please igenor this for time being. There were a few updated in Excell, but I fell too few...


  1.  On Ch 5 on Dissemination events, I need more input before I can start reviewing.

Thanks for fast contributions
Carlo

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