[Token-all] [TOken] D6.3 Governance

[Uwe ROTH]

Hi Carlo,

I added the figures as requested, but also did some changes to the other text. Esp the text that you copied from my review was often not intended for the general audience. Things are now shorter. To be honest, in my review some text was doubled and could be simplified.

I moved the subsections of 7 into 1. They make more sense at the beginning.
Please check.

Please check also the very last paragraph about the suggestions. This was also intended as suggestion for you/us, and might give a wrong message to the general audience. Please delete if you agree.

Some paragraphs have “Normal” instead of “Body of Text”. Please consider that while updating your “gold” version.

Maybe also clean up the supporting documents and remove all the yellow elements and questions. We mention these documents in main deliverable as “supporting” documents and might also need to provide them together with the main deliverable.


That’s it from my side. Have a nice Christmas and vacation. Also for those who made it to read until here. 😄

Best

Uwe
ITIS Department  |  TRUST Group
Luxembourg Institute of Science and Technology (LIST)

From: Carlo Harpes <harpes at itrust.lu>
Date: Wednesday, 21 December 2022 at 20:12
To: token-all at lists.fiware.org <token-all at lists.fiware.org>
Cc: Benjamin Hodzic <hodzic at itrust.lu>, Uwe ROTH <uwe.roth at list.lu>, Adnan Imeri <adnan.imeri at infrachain.com>
Subject: [TOken] D6.3 Governance
Dear all,

As discussed, please find here the document with the changes discussed at the meeting: This supersedes the former v0.4.

Please review and add reviews (I also added the zip) as the work suffers for some formatting issues when importing in Google.

In particular, Uwe should add his graph and PUC 4 should revie Ch 4.

Regards,
Carlo


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