[Fiware-cloud] URGENT: architecture deliverable comments

[Alex Glikson]

Dear partners,

I've finished the initial consolidation of the architecture deliverable. 
Unfortunately, I had to do massive editing of the resulting Word file, to 
bring it to a reasonable shape that can be considered for a formal 
delivery to the EU. Below are some comments following a brief review of 
the deliverable. Please, send me updated version of the Doc with change 
tracking before our weekly call on Wed. To avoid formatting issues -- 
please, make your updates in plain text, with instructions on how to apply 
them.

First of all, we must comply to the sections structure within the 
individual GE sections, In particular:
Compute [Ezra]: Design Principles section is missing
Object Storage [Kalman]: Main Interactions section is missing
Object Storage [Kalman]: Design Principles section is missing
Object Storage [Kalman]: need to better integrate Storlets within the 
different sub-sections -- it is supposed to be an inherent part of the 
proposed specification (and not a separate sub-section)
Self-Service Interfaces [Alvaro]: Main Concepts section is missing

Other comments:
Fernando -- FYI, I've removed some of the simple sequence diagrams in 
Policy Service, to make it look more similar to other Ges (which provide 
textual info rather than sequence diagrams in similar cases).
Would appreciate comments from ALL on the 'Introduction' section, as well 
as if you could review the GEs of others.
Ezra -- please, revise the Compute GE text a bit, to make it more fluent 
and coherent.
Kalman -- I suggest using a standard Swift architecture diagram (perhaps 
with augmentation showing storlets support?)
Alvaro -- need to update the architecture diagram with the new Cloud GEs




Thanks!
Alex

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Alex Glikson
Manager, Cloud Infrastructure Solutions, IBM Haifa Research Lab
Email: glikson at il.ibm.com | Phone: +972-4-8281085 | Mobile: 
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