Miguel does not like our Installation and Admin guides. I expect we will
get the same unfavorable review on the user guides.
Fernando:
Your manuals seem to have past his review. What tool did you use to
generate the manuals?
Best Regards,
Kenneth Nagin
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----- Forwarded by Kenneth Nagin/Haifa/IBM on 05/10/2016 08:02 AM -----
From: MIGUEL CARRILLO PACHECO <miguel.carrillopacheco at telefonica.com>
To: Kenneth Nagin/Haifa/IBM at IBMIL
Cc: JOSE MANUEL CANTERA FONSECA
<josemanuel.canterafonseca at telefonica.com>
Date: 04/10/2016 06:14 PM
Subject: Re: D.12.5.2 FIWARE Installation and Administration Guides
(Cloud).zip
Dear Kenneth,
I took a look myself. Unfortunately I see this well below the level of
maturity that I expected.
The "general" documents (sort, easy to edit) were plagued with mistakes
from it seems a rushed review of the one delivered in R4 since there are
mentions to R4 instead of R5. I corrected them myself together with other
details and they should be suitable for delivery. This message is not
about them.
The blocker comes when I see the individual manuals. Overall, they are
unacceptable and I wonder why they were sent as the final delivery.
Cloud portal installation manual- what format is this? It seems to come
from readsthedocs. Why was it rendered like this? Please follow the
guidelines to render from readthedocs properly
Docker installation manual - what format is this? Render from readthedocs
properly
Object Storage installation manual - what format is this?
Cloud portal user manual- what format is this? It seems to come from
readsthedocs. Why was it rendered like this? Please follow the guidelines
Docker user manual - wrong format. Render from readthedocs properly
Cloud portal installation manual - what format is this?. Render from
readthedocs properly
Best regards
Miguel
El 29/09/2016 a las 16:06, Kenneth Nagin escribió:
Best Regards,
Kenneth Nagin
Ph: +972-4-8296227
Cell: 054-6976227
Fx: +972-4- 8296114
http://researcher.ibm.com/view.php?person=il-NAGIN
From: MIGUEL CARRILLO PACHECO
<miguel.carrillopacheco at telefonica.com>
To: JOSE MANUEL CANTERA FONSECA
<josemanuel.canterafonseca at telefonica.com>
Cc: Kenneth Nagin/Haifa/IBM at IBMIL
Date: 29/09/2016 04:43 PM
Subject: Re: D.12.5.2 FIWARE Installation and Administration Guides
(Cloud).zip
José Manuel?
I presume that you made a quick review and started to see wrong links and
stopped. Theoretically this should be reviewed internally in cloud prior
to delivery so we would always expect this clean... Jose Manuel, can you
provide more info? I guess that you'll send a couple of examples but not
an exhaustive list.
El 29/09/2016 a las 14:42, Kenneth Nagin escribió:
Could you be more specific.
Which links are to R4 components?
Which pdfs are problematic?
Best Regards,
Kenneth Nagin
Ph: +972-4-8296227
Cell: 054-6976227
Fx: +972-4- 8296114
http://researcher.ibm.com/view.php?person=il-NAGIN
From: MIGUEL CARRILLO PACHECO
<miguel.carrillopacheco at telefonica.com>
To: Kenneth Nagin/Haifa/IBM at IBMIL
Date: 29/09/2016 03:33 PM
Subject: Re: D.12.5.2 FIWARE Installation and Administration Guides
(Cloud).zip
Dear Kenneth,
I have José Manuel's review.
Apparently, there are links to R4 components . Also, wrong pdf file names
User manuals look good from his point of view(my review is pending)
Regards,
Miguel
El 28/09/2016 a las 16:45, Kenneth Nagin escribió:
Best Regards,
Kenneth Nagin
Ph: +972-4-8296227
Cell: 054-6976227
Fx: +972-4- 8296114
http://researcher.ibm.com/view.php?person=il-NAGIN
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