[Fiware-i2nd] I2ND Deliverable review: action needed

[Jose Jaime Ariza]

Hi,

Here you have my review. I don't know how to answer to AG27, should we include information related to the protocol used by the API?

I don't know which format should the images title have.

BR,
Pepe
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De: fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org [fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org] En nombre de Antonini Roberto [roberto1.antonini at telecomitalia.it]
Enviado el: miércoles, 27 de mayo de 2015 12:40
Para: Garino Pierangelo; fiware-i2nd at lists.fi-ware.org
Asunto: [Fiware-i2nd] R: I2ND Deliverable review: action needed

Hi Pier,
Here attached is  my review, let me know if it’s OK.
I follow the methodology you propose, I left the comments and added the mine.

Thanks,
                R


Da: fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org [mailto:fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org] Per conto di Garino Pierangelo
Inviato: mercoledì 27 maggio 2015 08:28
A: fiware-i2nd at lists.fi-ware.org
Oggetto: [Fiware-i2nd] R: I2ND Deliverable review: action needed

Dear All,

When doing the action at point 1) of Giovanni’s mail, please remember to use the ‘track changes’: first of all check the comments and modifications required, then accept all the changes (i.e. ‘clean’ the document) and finally insert your updates.

This will help us merging together the different contributions.

Thanks and BR
Pier



Da: fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org [mailto:fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org] Per conto di Toffetti Carughi Giovanni (toff)
Inviato: martedì 26 maggio 2015 18:41
A: fiware-i2nd at lists.fi-ware.org
Oggetto: [Fiware-i2nd] I2ND Deliverable review: action needed

Dear I2NDers,

the review of our deliverable by the Cloud Chapter is in, you can find it here:
https://forge.fiware.org/docman/view.php/59/5132/I2ND_Architecture_R4-v4-reviewAG.docx

As a reference example of another chapter deliverable's quality you can use the cloud one:
https://forge.fiware.org/docman/view.php/59/5111/D.12.1.1+FIWARE+Architecture+-+Cloud+v0.3.docx

We have to provide the final I2ND chapter document by 3/6 (and the wiki should be consistent with it too). In order to do this I'd like to ask GE owners to:
1. edit their required changes in the Word document and send it to me and Pier by 2PM on 2/6
2. copy the changes also in the wiki (by 2/6 EOB)

Pier and I will then edit the final version of the doc and send it to coordination.

The chapter leader will remind you of these action points in the weekly call, but please start having a look at the comments and acting on them as soon as possible.

My regards,

g



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