[Fiware-i2nd] R: I2ND Deliverable review: action needed

[Federico Cimorelli]

Dear Pier,

find attached my review. The related wikipage is already updated according to 
my changes.
For any question, please let me know.


Regards,
Federico Cimorelli. 
 
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Federico Cimorelli
University of Rome 'La Sapienza'
Department of Computer, Automation and Management Engineering
tel. +39 06 77274034
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email: cimorelli at dis.uniroma1.it 


On Wednesday, May 27, 2015 06:27:56 AM Garino Pierangelo wrote:
> Dear All,
> 
> When doing the action at point 1) of Giovanni's mail, please remember to use
> the 'track changes': first of all check the comments and modifications
> required, then accept all the changes (i.e. 'clean' the document) and
> finally insert your updates.
> 
> This will help us merging together the different contributions.
> 
> Thanks and BR
> Pier
> 
> 
> 
> Da: fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org
> [mailto:fiware-i2nd-bounces at lists.fi-ware.org] Per conto di Toffetti
> Carughi Giovanni (toff) Inviato: martedì 26 maggio 2015 18:41
> A: fiware-i2nd at lists.fi-ware.org
> Oggetto: [Fiware-i2nd] I2ND Deliverable review: action needed
> 
> Dear I2NDers,
> 
> the review of our deliverable by the Cloud Chapter is in, you can find it
> here:
> https://forge.fiware.org/docman/view.php/59/5132/I2ND_Architecture_R4-v4-re
> viewAG.docx
> 
> As a reference example of another chapter deliverable's quality you can use
> the cloud one:
> https://forge.fiware.org/docman/view.php/59/5111/D.12.1.1+FIWARE+Architectu
> re+-+Cloud+v0.3.docx
> 
> We have to provide the final I2ND chapter document by 3/6 (and the wiki
> should be consistent with it too). In order to do this I'd like to ask GE
> owners to: 1. edit their required changes in the Word document and send it
> to me and Pier by 2PM on 2/6 2. copy the changes also in the wiki (by 2/6
> EOB)
> 
> Pier and I will then edit the final version of the doc and send it to
> coordination.
> 
> The chapter leader will remind you of these action points in the weekly
> call, but please start having a look at the comments and acting on them as
> soon as possible.
> 
> My regards,
> 
> g
> 
> 
> --
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> ----
> 
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> 
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> 
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> 
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> 
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> 
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