[Fiware-miwi] D.2.6.3 SotA Analysis - Emerging technologies WP13 contribution (internal review roundtrip)

[Jarkko Vatjus-Anttila]

Hello,

I read through the paper in my behalf, and the text seems to be pretty much
collected from the text that has been formulated already earlier. I my
opinion, it gives an overview of the state of the art and as such I would
guess it works as a deliverable for this purpose. However, having said
that, I may not know all exact requirements what this deliverable is
expected to fulfill.

I made minor changes here and there, mainly fixing misspellings and word
ordering. The modified document is attached here, with track changes
enabled.

- jarkko


On Fri, Mar 14, 2014 at 10:00 PM, Marti Christof (mach) <mach at zhaw.ch>wrote:

> Hi Philipp, dear WP13 GE Owners
>
> Also due in M36 is an updated version (D.2.6.3) of the "State of the art
> analysis - emerging technologies" deliverable. The previous release can be
> found here:
> https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+-+Emerging+Technologies.pdf<https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+%E2%80%93+Emerging+Technologies.pdf>
>
> Idea for all existing WPs is to provide a management summary and do only
> required updates on the existing chapters.
> Because there is no Web User Interfaces chapter in the last deliverable I
> took the content from the FI-Core proposal and tried to put together a WP13
> contribution for this deliverable.
> It was more work than expected, because the writing style in a proposal is
> a little bit different than for this deliverable. So I would like to ask
> Philipp (and the respective GE owner for their part) to review the attached
> document (in change tracking mode), add missing content and in particular
> also add missing entries in the "Reference" section.
>
> Deadline for delivering updates to the coordinator for review is/was today
> (March 14th). Because of this additional internal review roundtrip, this
> will not be feasible.
> If each GE owner can review its 20 to 30 lines and Philipp keeps am eye on
> the overarching context until Monday noon, the delay would be minimal.
>
> Thanks for your contributions.
>
> @Miguel, Juanjo: I do not want to release this without the OK of Philipp
> and the domain experts.
>
> Best regards
> Christof
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