[Fiware-miwi] D.2.6.3 SotA Analysis - Emerging technologies WP13 contribution (internal review roundtrip)

[Philipp Slusallek]

Hi,

I did go through the text and fixed quite a few missing references and 
marked some others that are still missing (please can some of the people 
involved in those GEs fix them).

In general, there is a lack of references to previous work in quite a 
few of the GE descriptions. Please follow the model we have done in the 
middleware section and add some more references to previous work and 
then position your work in FI-WARE in relation to that.


Best,

	Philipp


Am 15.03.2014 08:13, schrieb Jarkko Vatjus-Anttila:
> Hello,
>
> I read through the paper in my behalf, and the text seems to be pretty
> much collected from the text that has been formulated already earlier. I
> my opinion, it gives an overview of the state of the art and as such I
> would guess it works as a deliverable for this purpose. However, having
> said that, I may not know all exact requirements what this deliverable
> is expected to fulfill.
>
> I made minor changes here and there, mainly fixing misspellings and word
> ordering. The modified document is attached here, with track changes
> enabled.
>
> - jarkko
>
>
> On Fri, Mar 14, 2014 at 10:00 PM, Marti Christof (mach) <mach at zhaw.ch
> <mailto:mach at zhaw.ch>> wrote:
>
>     Hi Philipp, dear WP13 GE Owners
>
>     Also due in M36 is an updated version (D.2.6.3) of the „State of the
>     art analysis - emerging technologies“ deliverable. The previous
>     release can be found here:
>     https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+–+Emerging+Technologies.pdf
>     <https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+%E2%80%93+Emerging+Technologies.pdf>
>
>     Idea for all existing WPs is to provide a management summary and do
>     only required updates on the existing chapters.
>     Because there is no Web User Interfaces chapter in the last
>     deliverable I took the content from the FI-Core proposal and tried
>     to put together a WP13 contribution for this deliverable.
>     It was more work than expected, because the writing style in a
>     proposal is a little bit different than for this deliverable. So I
>     would like to ask Philipp (and the respective GE owner for their
>     part) to review the attached document (in change tracking mode), add
>     missing content and in particular also add missing entries in the
>     „Reference" section.
>
>     Deadline for delivering updates to the coordinator for review is/was
>     today (March 14th). Because of this additional internal review
>     roundtrip, this will not be feasible.
>     If each GE owner can review its 20 to 30 lines and Philipp keeps am
>     eye on the overarching context until Monday noon, the delay would be
>     minimal.
>
>     Thanks for your contributions.
>
>     @Miguel, Juanjo: I do not want to release this without the OK of
>     Philipp and the domain experts.
>
>     Best regards
>     Christof
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