Hi, to me the Synchronization and Virtual Characters sections looked OK. I did a minor edit (games engines -> game engines) which is attached. - Lasse > Hi, > > I did go through the text and fixed quite a few missing references and > marked some others that are still missing (please can some of the people > involved in those GEs fix them). > > In general, there is a lack of references to previous work in quite a > few of the GE descriptions. Please follow the model we have done in the > middleware section and add some more references to previous work and > then position your work in FI-WARE in relation to that. > > > Best, > > Philipp > > > Am 15.03.2014 08:13, schrieb Jarkko Vatjus-Anttila: >> Hello, >> >> I read through the paper in my behalf, and the text seems to be pretty >> much collected from the text that has been formulated already earlier. I >> my opinion, it gives an overview of the state of the art and as such I >> would guess it works as a deliverable for this purpose. However, having >> said that, I may not know all exact requirements what this deliverable >> is expected to fulfill. >> >> I made minor changes here and there, mainly fixing misspellings and word >> ordering. The modified document is attached here, with track changes >> enabled. >> >> - jarkko >> >> >> On Fri, Mar 14, 2014 at 10:00 PM, Marti Christof (mach) <mach at zhaw.ch >> <mailto:mach at zhaw.ch>> wrote: >> >> Hi Philipp, dear WP13 GE Owners >> >> Also due in M36 is an updated version (D.2.6.3) of the „State of the >> art analysis - emerging technologies“ deliverable. The previous >> release can be found here: >> https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+–+Emerging+Technologies.pdf >> <https://forge.fi-ware.org/docman/view.php/7/2667/D.2.6.2+State+of+the+Art+Analysis+%E2%80%93+Emerging+Technologies.pdf> >> >> Idea for all existing WPs is to provide a management summary and do >> only required updates on the existing chapters. >> Because there is no Web User Interfaces chapter in the last >> deliverable I took the content from the FI-Core proposal and tried >> to put together a WP13 contribution for this deliverable. >> It was more work than expected, because the writing style in a >> proposal is a little bit different than for this deliverable. So I >> would like to ask Philipp (and the respective GE owner for their >> part) to review the attached document (in change tracking mode), add >> missing content and in particular also add missing entries in the >> „Reference" section. >> >> Deadline for delivering updates to the coordinator for review is/was >> today (March 14th). Because of this additional internal review >> roundtrip, this will not be feasible. >> If each GE owner can review its 20 to 30 lines and Philipp keeps am >> eye on the overarching context until Monday noon, the delay would be >> minimal. >> >> Thanks for your contributions. >> >> @Miguel, Juanjo: I do not want to release this without the OK of >> Philipp and the domain experts. >> >> Best regards >> Christof >> ---- >> InIT Cloud Computing Lab - ICCLab >> Institut of Applied Information Technology - InIT >> Zurich University of Applied Sciences - ZHAW >> School of Engineering >> Phone: +41 58 934 70 63 <tel:%2B41%2058%20934%2070%2063> >> Skype: christof-marti >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Fiware-miwi mailing list >> Fiware-miwi at lists.fi-ware.eu <mailto:Fiware-miwi at lists.fi-ware.eu> >> https://lists.fi-ware.eu/listinfo/fiware-miwi >> >> >> >> >> -- >> Jarkko Vatjus-Anttila >> VP, Technology >> Cyberlightning Ltd. >> >> mobile. +358 405245142 >> email. jarkko at cyberlightning.com <mailto:jarkko at cyberlightning.com> >> >> Go to www.cybersli.de <http://www.cybersli.de/> and enrich your >> presentations! >> >> www.cyberlightning.com <http://www.cyberlightning.com/> > > > -- > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------- > Deutsches Forschungszentrum für Künstliche Intelligenz (DFKI) GmbH > Trippstadter Strasse 122, D-67663 Kaiserslautern > > Geschäftsführung: > Prof. Dr. Dr. h.c. mult. Wolfgang Wahlster (Vorsitzender) > Dr. Walter Olthoff > Vorsitzender des Aufsichtsrats: > Prof. Dr. h.c. Hans A. Aukes > > Sitz der Gesellschaft: Kaiserslautern (HRB 2313) > USt-Id.Nr.: DE 148646973, Steuernummer: 19/673/0060/3 > --------------------------------------------------------------------------- > _______________________________________________ > Fiware-miwi mailing list > Fiware-miwi at lists.fi-ware.eu > https://lists.fi-ware.eu/listinfo/fiware-miwi > -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: D.2.6.3 State of the Art Analysis - Emerging Technologies - WP13-1-phs-l?.docx Type: application/binary Size: 433067 bytes Desc: not available URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/fiware-miwi/attachments/20140317/2119f8c7/attachment.bin>
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