[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update + 2.2

[Sofia Taborda]

Morning Mirko, all,

I can also go through sections 1-3, will do mock evaluation for that part.

Best,
Sofia


On 9 Apr 2016, at 11:54, Mirko Presser <mirko.presser at alexandra.dk<mailto:mirko.presser at alexandra.dk>> wrote:

Dear all,

Here is a section 2.1 update.

LUIS will look at the 2.1.1 points 4-9.

Any VOLUNTEERS to look through 1-3?

I am expecting inputs from MARGARIDA for the KPIs - she will collect this form the cities.

I need the Mexican City description. SERGIO

I need ATOS - NURIA, TELEFONICA - SERGIO, PHILIPS - REMCO, ENGINEERING - STEPHANO to look at 2.1.2.10 and shorten to 1-2 pages. Each company gets 1/3 page max.

MIRKO to write an intro to 2.1.2 based on the moved figure (Arup Table) which sits now in section 1.

We have 9 cities (including the Mexican city) - this means that with 1 page per city we spend 50% on that. Most of the content is boasting how great the cities already are. We don't need that in this section - that can be in section 4 - what we need is how SynchroiCity will help you propel you even further into becoming an even greater city. So - EACH CITY should revise their inputs to focus on IMPACT and not how great they are. 2/3 pages per city is max.

Any VOLUNTEERS to check barriers and obstacles 2.1.3? - shorten to 1.5 pages

SERGIO - I need that standards table 2.1.4.

I have deleted the section on other societal impact that Pentti made based on PEST - it was too generic.

MARTIN - please give me a first draft for 2.1.5 Quantifiable Impact of the Project form a project perspective - cities will be coming in from MARGARIDA's work.

Ana - could you give a status on 2.2?

Finally we have a page limit problem. We need to cut this down to 20 pages. Including 2.2! So we are not looking for volume.

Thanks

Mirko

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