[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update + 2.2

[Sebastien Ziegler]

I suggest to adopt the font Arial narrow 11 and to align all lateral 
margin to the minimum indicated in the template (1.5 cm if I remember well).



Le 09.04.2016 12:53, Mirko Presser a écrit :
> Dear all,
>
> Here is a section 2.1 update.
>
> LUIS will look at the 2.1.1 points 4-9.
>
> Any VOLUNTEERS to look through 1-3?
>
> I am expecting inputs from MARGARIDA for the KPIs – she will collect 
> this form the cities.
>
> I need the Mexican City description. SERGIO
>
> I need ATOS - NURIA, TELEFONICA - SERGIO, PHILIPS - REMCO, ENGINEERING 
> - STEPHANO to look at 2.1.2.10 and shorten to 1-2 pages. Each company 
> gets 1/3 page max.
>
> MIRKO to write an intro to 2.1.2 based on the moved figure (Arup 
> Table) which sits now in section 1.
>
> We have 9 cities (including the Mexican city) - this means that with 1 
> page per city we spend 50% on that. Most of the content is boasting 
> how great the cities already are. We don’t need that in this section – 
> that can be in section 4 – what we need is how SynchroiCity will help 
> you propel you even further into becoming an even greater city. So – 
> EACH CITY should revise their inputs to focus on IMPACT and not how 
> great they are. 2/3 pages per city is max.
>
> Any VOLUNTEERS to check barriers and obstacles 2.1.3? - shorten to 1.5 
> pages
>
> SERGIO – I need that standards table 2.1.4.
>
> I have deleted the section on other societal impact that Pentti made 
> based on PEST – it was too generic.
>
> MARTIN – please give me a first draft for 2.1.5 Quantifiable Impact of 
> the Project form a project perspective – cities will be coming in from 
> MARGARIDA’s work.
>
> Ana – could you give a status on 2.2?
>
> Finally we have a page limit problem. We need to cut this down to 20 
> pages. Including 2.2! So we are not looking for volume.
>
> Thanks
>
> Mirko
>
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*Sébastien Ziegler
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President, IoT Forum
Vice Chairman, IEEE ComSoc Internet of Things TsC
Rapporteur on Research and Emerging Technologies for the IoT and Smart 
Cities, ITU-T SG20
Coordinator IoT Lab, F-Interop and Privacy Flag European research projects

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