[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update + 2.2

[Ana Garcia]

HI Mirko,

I think section 2.2 is ready now for integration with 2.1 and to have a
single doc. Please provide feedback about the length. Thanks
Sebastien/Nuria/Alex/all for great contributions.
I left marked some parts that require input and review, and still
iterations needed.

In alignment with Sebastien's comments there is a need to strength
sustainability aspect after the project. I will add input from Martin
relation to OASC in next iteration, but extra-input review would be useful.

@Nadia, I added a short paragraph in relation to the open call
dissemination from your vision statement. Let me know if sufficient.

In relation to the Dissemination part, to have a very brief input from all
the partners (individual diss plans) would strength it dramatically
(dissemination builds upon all the partners channels and activities, what
is really strong in this consortium). @Mirko, please let me know how we are
doing with extension so I can send out a last minute call for input from all

It would be useful if someone can start content review with critical eyes.
volunteers?


Best,
Ana García
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On 9 April 2016 at 21:52, Mirko Presser <mirko.presser at alexandra.dk> wrote:

> Dear all,
>
> Here is a section 2.1 update. YELLOW ARE ACTIONS NEEDED NOW, GREEN ARE
> THANKS and GRAY ARE OBSOLETE/RESOLVED
>
> LUIS will look at the 2.1.1 points 4-9. THANKS – I am looking forward to
> 9 as the final one. LUIS
>
> Any VOLUNTEERS to look through 1-3?
>
> I am expecting inputs from MARGARIDA for the KPIs – she will collect this
> form the cities. Great job on the table – now we go to have the cities
> fill it out. MIL, SAN, CAR, MAN, HEL, ANT, EIN + MEXICAN CITY. See
> attached table – complete and return to
> margarida.campolargo at portodigital.pt <margarida.campolargo at portodigital.pt
> >
>
> I need the Mexican City description. SERGIO
>
> I need ATOS - NURIA, TELEFONICA - SERGIO, PHILIPS - REMCO, ENGINEERING -
> STEPHANO to look at 2.1.2.10 and shorten to 1-2 pages. Each company gets
> 1/3 page max. THANKS Nuria and Martino
>
> MIRKO to write an intro to 2.1.2 based on the moved figure (Arup Table)
> which sits now in section 1.
>
> We have 9 cities (including the Mexican city) - this means that with 1
> page per city we spend 50% on that. Most of the content is boasting how
> great the cities already are. We don’t need that in this section – that can
> be in section 4 – what we need is how SynchroiCity will help you propel you
> even further into becoming an even greater city. So – EACH CITY should
> revise their inputs to focus on IMPACT and not how great they are. 2/3
> pages per city is max. I got MIL. Need POR, SAN, CAR, MAN, HEL, ANT, EIN
>  + MEXICAN CITY
>
> Any VOLUNTEERS to check barriers and obstacles 2.1.3? - shorten to 1.5
> pages
>
> SERGIO – I need that standards table 2.1.4.
>
> I have deleted the section on other societal impact that Pentti made
> based on PEST – it was too generic.
>
> MARTIN – please give me a first draft for 2.1.5 Quantifiable Impact of
> the Project form a project perspective – cities will be coming in from
> MARGARIDA’s work.
>
> Ana – could you give a status on 2.2? Thanks on the status – when do you
> think we can combine 2.1 and 2.2?
>
> Finally we have a page limit problem. We need to cut this down to 20
> pages. Including 2.2! So we are not looking for volume.
>
> Thanks
>
> Mirko
>
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