Hi, You meant we can not go beyond 6 pages, right? Yes I keep working on it. Shall I keep using the version in google drive? Best, Ana García Director *ENoLL ivzw | Pleinlaan 9** | 1050 Brussels | Belgium | www.openlivinglabs.eu <http://www.openlivinglabs.eu/>* *T: | F: +32 2 629 16 13 | M: +32 470 19 3118 * *@openlivinglabs **| @RoblesAG* On 10 April 2016 at 13:39, Mirko Presser <mirko.presser at alexandra.dk> wrote: > Ana – we are still on 5-6 pages for section 2.2. I am working on getting > section 2.1 down and the final inputs. > Will you keep maintaining 2.2? > > Thanks > > Mirko > *____________________________________________* > *MIRKO PRESSER* > *INTERNET OF THINGS EXPERT AND TEAM LEADER* > DATA SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING LAB > > ALEXANDRA INSTITUTTET A/S > ÅBOGADE 34, 8200 AARHUS N > KONTOR: HOPPER-333 > > + 45 30 49 09 76 > mirko.presser at alexandra.dk <fornavn.efternavn at alexandra.dk> > alexandra.dk <http://www.alexandra.dk/> > linkedin.com/in/mirkopresser > twitter.com/mirkopresser > *____________________________________________* > > > > From: Ana Garcia <ana.garcia at enoll.org> > Date: Sunday 10 April 2016 02:13 > To: Mirko Presser <mirko.presser at alexandra.dk> > Cc: Sebastien Ziegler <sziegler at mandint.org>, Alex Gluhak < > alex.gluhak at digicatapult.org.uk>, " > Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org" < > Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org>, " > margarida.campolargo at portodigital.pt" < > margarida.campolargo at portodigital.pt> > Subject: Re: [oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update + 2.2 > > HI Mirko, > > I think section 2.2 is ready now for integration with 2.1 and to have a > single doc. Please provide feedback about the length. Thanks > Sebastien/Nuria/Alex/all for great contributions. > I left marked some parts that require input and review, and still > iterations needed. > > In alignment with Sebastien's comments there is a need to strength > sustainability aspect after the project. I will add input from Martin > relation to OASC in next iteration, but extra-input review would be useful. > > @Nadia, I added a short paragraph in relation to the open call > dissemination from your vision statement. Let me know if sufficient. > > In relation to the Dissemination part, to have a very brief input from all > the partners (individual diss plans) would strength it dramatically > (dissemination builds upon all the partners channels and activities, what > is really strong in this consortium). @Mirko, please let me know how we > are doing with extension so I can send out a last minute call for input > from all > > It would be useful if someone can start content review with critical eyes. > volunteers? > > > Best, > Ana García > Director > > *ENoLL ivzw | Pleinlaan 9** | 1050 Brussels | Belgium > | www.openlivinglabs.eu <http://www.openlivinglabs.eu/>* > > *T: | F: +32 2 629 16 13 <%2B32%202%20629%2016%2013> | M: +32 470 19 3118 > <%2B32%20470%2019%203118> * > > *@openlivinglabs **| @RoblesAG* > > > > On 9 April 2016 at 21:52, Mirko Presser <mirko.presser at alexandra.dk> > wrote: > >> Dear all, >> >> Here is a section 2.1 update. YELLOW ARE ACTIONS NEEDED NOW, GREEN ARE >> THANKS and GRAY ARE OBSOLETE/RESOLVED >> >> LUIS will look at the 2.1.1 points 4-9. THANKS – I am looking forward to >> 9 as the final one. LUIS >> >> Any VOLUNTEERS to look through 1-3? >> >> I am expecting inputs from MARGARIDA for the KPIs – she will collect >> this form the cities. Great job on the table – now we go to have the >> cities fill it out. MIL, SAN, CAR, MAN, HEL, ANT, EIN + MEXICAN CITY. >> See attached table – complete and return to >> margarida.campolargo at portodigital.pt < >> margarida.campolargo at portodigital.pt> >> >> I need the Mexican City description. SERGIO >> >> I need ATOS - NURIA, TELEFONICA - SERGIO, PHILIPS - REMCO, ENGINEERING - >> STEPHANO to look at 2.1.2.10 and shorten to 1-2 pages. Each company gets >> 1/3 page max. THANKS Nuria and Martino >> >> MIRKO to write an intro to 2.1.2 based on the moved figure (Arup Table) >> which sits now in section 1. >> >> We have 9 cities (including the Mexican city) - this means that with 1 >> page per city we spend 50% on that. Most of the content is boasting how >> great the cities already are. We don’t need that in this section – that can >> be in section 4 – what we need is how SynchroiCity will help you propel you >> even further into becoming an even greater city. So – EACH CITY should >> revise their inputs to focus on IMPACT and not how great they are. 2/3 >> pages per city is max. I got MIL. Need POR, SAN, CAR, MAN, HEL, ANT, EIN >> + MEXICAN CITY >> >> Any VOLUNTEERS to check barriers and obstacles 2.1.3? - shorten to 1.5 >> pages >> >> SERGIO – I need that standards table 2.1.4. >> >> I have deleted the section on other societal impact that Pentti made >> based on PEST – it was too generic. >> >> MARTIN – please give me a first draft for 2.1.5 Quantifiable Impact of >> the Project form a project perspective – cities will be coming in from >> MARGARIDA’s work. >> >> Ana – could you give a status on 2.2? Thanks on the status – when do you >> think we can combine 2.1 and 2.2? >> >> Finally we have a page limit problem. We need to cut this down to 20 >> pages. Including 2.2! So we are not looking for volume. >> >> Thanks >> >> Mirko >> >> *____________________________________________* >> *MIRKO PRESSER* >> *INTERNET OF THINGS EXPERT AND TEAM LEADER* >> DATA SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING LAB >> >> ALEXANDRA INSTITUTTET A/S >> ÅBOGADE 34, 8200 AARHUS N >> KONTOR: HOPPER-333 >> >> + 45 30 49 09 76 >> mirko.presser at alexandra.dk <fornavn.efternavn at alexandra.dk> >> alexandra.dk <http://www.alexandra.dk/> >> linkedin.com/in/mirkopresser >> twitter.com/mirkopresser >> *____________________________________________* >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities mailing list >> Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org >> https://lists.fiware.org/listinfo/fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities >> >> > -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities/attachments/20160410/79b9a8b1/attachment.html>
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