[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update + 2.2

[Sebastien Ziegler]

Here it is with track change.

Le 10.04.2016 21:39, Mirko Presser a écrit :
> Dear all,
>
> A new update. Thanks for all your inputs. We are down to 22 pages for 
> 2.1 +2.2 but need to save 2 more page and improve a few more points.
>
> 2.1
>
> Some edits on the first table form BRAM. Thanks.
> BRAM – please look at 2.1.1 point 5 – this can be much better: /User 
> acceptance validation addressing privacy, security, vulnerability, 
> liability, identification of user needs, concerns and expectations of 
> the IoT solutions. /
> SEBASTIEN – please look at 2.1.1 point 6 – this needs to be aligned 
> and referenced to section 2.2: /Significant and measureable 
> contribution to standards or pre-normative activities in the pilots' 
> areas of action via the implementation of open platforms./
> MARGARIDA – please look at 2.1.1 point 7 – this needs some more 
> specifics maybe – can you think of how to handle this? Can we provide 
> things like save 1 hour time like the Helsinki text says? /Improvement 
> of citizens' quality of life, in the public and private spheres, in 
> terms of autonomy, convenience and comfort, participatory approaches, 
> health and lifestyle, and access to services. /
> NURIA – please look at 2.1.1 point 8 – this can be improved with some 
> material form FIWARE maybe?: /Creation of opportunities for 
> entrepreneurs by promoting new market openings, providing access to 
> valuable datasets and direct interactions with users, expanding local 
> businesses to European scale, etc. /
> SERGIO – please look at 2.1.1 point 9 – this needs an industrial 
> context. /Development of secure and sustainable European IoT 
> ecosystems and contribution to IoT infrastructures viable beyond the 
> duration of the Pilot. /
>
> Please run through the cities and shorten, sharpen the text. What is 
> the IMPACT for the city.
> Eindhoven – REMCO
> Helsinki – ROOPE
> Porto – MARGARIDA
> Santander – LUIS
> Carouge – SEBASTIEN
>
> 2.2
> Section is completed but need revisions, and some additional material:
>
> 1. Read the Exploitation strategy to see whether convincing (we can 
> balance text with the exploitation potential and add a bit more info 
> about OASC). Sebastien/Nuria/Martin/Alex/Mirko/Juanjo.....
> 2. IPR, I added some new parts provided by Remco (not all). I suggest 
> industrial partners to read. I may need to reduce this part if section 
> too long. Industrial partners mainly
> 3. Dissemination events: ALL, if you have time send your list or some 
> more.
> 4. Add relation with other research projects and initiatives (from 
> 1.2.4) Ana
>
> This is starting to look like good a section. We should aim for GREAT!
>
> Thanks
>
> Mirko/Ana
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*Sébastien Ziegler
Director, Mandat International*
President, IoT Forum
Vice Chairman, IEEE ComSoc Internet of Things TsC
Rapporteur on Research and Emerging Technologies for the IoT and Smart 
Cities, ITU-T SG20
Coordinator IoT Lab, F-Interop and Privacy Flag European research projects

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