[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] Section 2.1 update + 2.2

[Mirko Presser]

Dear all,



2.1

There are some concerns of the great ambition in the first table of section 2.

BRAM – please look at 2.1.1 point 5 – this can be much better: User acceptance validation addressing privacy, security, vulnerability, liability, identification of user needs, concerns and expectations of the IoT solutions.
Sent to Martin Integrated Not SEBASTIEN – please look at 2.1.1 point 6 – this needs to be aligned and referenced to section 2.2: Significant and measureable contribution to standards or pre-normative activities in the pilots' areas of action via the implementation of open platforms.
MARGARIDA – please look at 2.1.1 point 7 – this needs some more specifics maybe – can you think of how to handle this? Can we provide things like save 1 hour time like the Helsinki text says? Improvement of citizens' quality of life, in the public and private spheres, in terms of autonomy, convenience and comfort, participatory approaches, health and lifestyle, and access to services.
NURIA – please look at 2.1.1 point 8 – this can be improved with some material form FIWARE maybe?: Creation of opportunities for entrepreneurs by promoting new market openings, providing access to valuable datasets and direct interactions with users, expanding local businesses to European scale, etc.
SERGIO – please look at 2.1.1 point 9 – this needs an industrial context. Development of secure and sustainable European IoT ecosystems and contribution to IoT infrastructures viable beyond the duration of the Pilot.

Please run through the cities and shorten, sharpen the text. What is the IMPACT for the city.
Eindhoven – REMCO
Helsinki – ROOPE
Porto – MARGARIDA
Santander – LUIS
Sent to Martin Integrated Not Carouge – SEBASTIEN

2.2
Section is completed but need revisions, and some additional material:

1. Read the Exploitation strategy to see whether convincing (we can balance text with the exploitation potential and add a bit more info about OASC). Sebastien/Nuria/Martin/Alex/Mirko/Juanjo.....
2. IPR, I added some new parts provided by Remco (not all). I suggest industrial partners to read. I may need to reduce this part if section too long. Industrial partners mainly
3. Dissemination events: ALL, if you have time send your list or some more.
4. Add relation with other research projects and initiatives (from 1.2.4) Ana

This is starting to look like good a section. We should aim for GREAT!

Thanks

Mirko/Ana
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