[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] review section 4 5

[Adriënne Heijnen]

Dear all,

Section 4-5 has not yet been reviewed internally.
Any volunteers?

Partner profiles is rather a matter of style
Reference zone descriptions is the left over from section 2.1

Pls spent some tim on reviewing Vision statement for the open call to make sure that this is in place. My suggestion is to change the title "vision statement" in to something more concrete like "call process" or instructions

5. Ethics and security is written by Sebastien and has been sent around previously

Other wise same message as Martin below:
If you take bigger parts, let me know when you start, and take one specific sub-section.

Thanks!
Adriënne

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Senior Scientific Advisor//Researcher

AU Smart Cities
Aarhus University
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On 12/04/16 12:20, "fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org<mailto:fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org> on behalf of Martin Brynskov" <fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org<mailto:fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities-bounces at lists.fiware.org> on behalf of brynskov at cavi.au.dk<mailto:brynskov at cavi.au.dk>> wrote:

Dear all,

Here's the version currently uploaded. Task assignments in WPs have not been updated, but WPs have.

Ana is reviewing Section 1.

Next upload around 13h CEST.

If you take bigger parts, let me know when you start, and take one specific sub-section. I'm not really sure who' out there.

Best,
Martin

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Martin Brynskov, Ph.D.
Associate professor, interaction technologies
Aarhus University

Chair, Open & Agile Smart Cities // oascities.org
Research director, AU Smart Cities // smartcities.au.dk
Director, Digital Design Lab // ddlab.dk
Participatory IT Centre // Digital Urban Living // CAVI
Tel. (+45) 3068 0424
More info: http://au.dk/en/brynskov@cavi

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