[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] v9

[Martin Brynskov]

Thanks, Alexandre. Just beware with this approach, because it may interfere with what others are doing. It's best to take a specific section and let me know. But OK, ju can send me input, but wait until next version.

Now I integrate and upload. Please finish what you're doing, send it to me ASAP and wait for next version.

Best,
Martin

> On 12. apr. 2016, at 13.20, Alexandre Sousa <avs at portodigital.pt> wrote:
> 
> Martin,
> 
> I reviewed the first 35 pages (up to Section 2.1.3) of the 70 pages document and found the minor errors marked in the PDF in annex. I used only red highlight and added a bookmark if some explanation was needed (in pages 21 and 22, the conversion to PDF in places where "a reference not found" ocurred added extra text that does not exist in the Word document and just flowed from the next column, I marked that in orange as there is nothing to fix).
> 
> I will continue reviewing the rest of the text.
> 
> Regards
> 
> Alexandre Sousa
> 
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Martin Brynskov" <brynskov at cavi.au.dk>
> To: <Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org>
> Sent: Tuesday, April 12, 2016 11:20 AM
> Subject: [oasc-iot-lsp-cities] v9
> 
> 
> Dear all,
> 
> Here's the version currently uploaded. Task assignments in WPs have not been updated, but WPs have.
> 
> Ana is reviewing Section 1.
> 
> Next upload around 13h CEST.
> 
> If you take bigger parts, let me know when you start, and take one specific sub-section. I'm not really sure who' out there.
> 
> Best,
> Martin
> 
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> Martin Brynskov, Ph.D.
> Associate professor, interaction technologies
> Aarhus University
> 
> Chair, Open & Agile Smart Cities // oascities.org
> Research director, AU Smart Cities // smartcities.au.dk
> Director, Digital Design Lab // ddlab.dk
> Participatory IT Centre // Digital Urban Living // CAVI
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Martin Brynskov, Ph.D.
Associate professor, interaction technologies
Aarhus University

Chair, Open & Agile Smart Cities // oascities.org
Research director, AU Smart Cities // smartcities.au.dk
Director, Digital Design Lab // ddlab.dk
Participatory IT Centre // Digital Urban Living // CAVI
Tel. (+45) 3068 0424
More info: http://au.dk/en/brynskov@cavi