[oasc-iot-lsp-cities] v9

[Alexandre Sousa]

Martin,

I reviewed the first 35 pages (up to Section 2.1.3) of the 70 pages document 
and found the minor errors marked in the PDF in annex. I used only red 
highlight and added a bookmark if some explanation was needed (in pages 21 
and 22, the conversion to PDF in places where "a reference not found" 
ocurred added extra text that does not exist in the Word document and just 
flowed from the next column, I marked that in orange as there is nothing to 
fix).

I will continue reviewing the rest of the text.

Regards

Alexandre Sousa

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Martin Brynskov" <brynskov at cavi.au.dk>
To: <Fiware-oasc-iot-lsp-cities at lists.fiware.org>
Sent: Tuesday, April 12, 2016 11:20 AM
Subject: [oasc-iot-lsp-cities] v9


Dear all,

Here's the version currently uploaded. Task assignments in WPs have not been 
updated, but WPs have.

Ana is reviewing Section 1.

Next upload around 13h CEST.

If you take bigger parts, let me know when you start, and take one specific 
sub-section. I'm not really sure who' out there.

Best,
Martin

--
Martin Brynskov, Ph.D.
Associate professor, interaction technologies
Aarhus University

Chair, Open & Agile Smart Cities // oascities.org
Research director, AU Smart Cities // smartcities.au.dk
Director, Digital Design Lab // ddlab.dk
Participatory IT Centre // Digital Urban Living // CAVI
Tel. (+45) 3068 0424
More info: http://au.dk/en/brynskov@cavi



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