[Fiware-wpa] R: [Fiware-wpl] Current draft of periodic report

[Garino Pierangelo]

Hi Juanjo,

although much later than the deadline here is my feedback concerning the report.
Main things:
- Comments added in WP2 (possible duplicated text)
- One modification to WP6 text
- Some modifications to WP7
- a few typos (easily found with track changes

BR
Pier


-----Messaggio originale-----
Da: fiware-wpl-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu [mailto:fiware-wpl-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] Per conto di Juanjo Hierro
Inviato: lunedì 10 giugno 2013 16:38
A: fiware-wpl at lists.fi-ware.eu; fiware-wpa at lists.fi-ware.eu
Oggetto: [Fiware-wpl] Current draft of periodic report

Hi,

   I pass it to you as it stands now in case you can provide some early feedback.

  Cheers,

-- Juanjo

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