Hi Rajiv, I have conducted a careful revision of D4.1. In general, the document is well structured, with a lot of details which helps the reader to understand what happened. Very good in that respect. However, it was a surprise to find that there were several parts of the document which apparently were copy and paste of communications of the experiments or global coordination meeting minutes. As a consequence, the tone used (e.g., "during the workshop ... your experiment ..." or "... Juanjo tends to think that we should run it virtually ..."). Thanks god I decided to go for this careful review instead of taking as granted everything was ok (and it seemed from a high level review). The decisions on verb tense to use were sometimes rather strange. I found inconsistencies in the verb tense being used when describing a stage and what happened during the stage. Thus, stage 0, 1 and 2 were described in present tense (a bit strange) while the description of stage 3 was in past tense. I then have changed them all to be past tense since this is a report of something that happened, this way also making them consistent). It was strange that a future tense was used in some cases referring to things that took place in the past (overall, when the date was given, e.g., "The Welcome event will take place virtually ... until January 28th 2022"). I moved them also to past tense. Bottom line, I tried to do my best to leave things as harmonized and meaningful as possible but took quite some time and rather detailed review. Besides, that lot of suggested edits here and there. Please review the suggested edits and produce a clean version we can submit. I will take care of D1.7 tonight. Cheers, Juanjo On 23/1/23 11:35, Juanjo Hierro wrote: > > Hi, > > As explained on whatsapp, review of the Playbook kept me busy all > the time I had booked for reviews during the weekend. Now > deliverables 1.7 and 4.1 are top priority. > > I'm currently on D4.1 as you explained to me that is a longer > hanging fruit. > > Cheers, > > Juanjo > > > On 23/1/23 10:37, Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE wrote: >> Hi Juanjo, >> >> It's been days and no updates from your end are still part of the >> document. Can you finish the updates today as we had discussed. I >> would like that these deliverables are submitted today itself. >> >> Regards, >> Rajiv Rajani >> >> >> On Tue, Jan 17, 2023 at 6:36 PM Juanjo Hierro >> <juanjose.hierro at fiware.org> wrote: >> >> Hi, >> >> I plan to finalize my final review tonight. Unfortunately, I >> couldn't spend the time I was planning during the weekend and >> yesterday and today got very busy. >> >> Cheers, >> >> Juanjo >> >> On 17/1/23 09:32, Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE wrote: >>> Dear Partners, >>> >>> Can you please finish your part in D4.1 and D1.7 deliverables. >>> As was discussed last Friday, I was expecting updates in D1.7 >>> but I do not see any updates. >>> For D4.1 there are only a few comments, if you can close them, >>> we can prepare that deliverable for submission. >>> >>> Regards, >>> Rajiv Rajani >>> >>> >>> On Mon, Jan 9, 2023 at 10:24 AM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE >>> <rajiv at ishare.eu> wrote: >>> >>> Dear Partners, >>> >>> I have not seen a single edit in any of these deliverables >>> from any of you. Can you please make sure that you finish >>> the deliverables today so we can submit them asap? >>> >>> Especially, D1.7 has quite some edits pending and have been >>> tagged to relevant people, please look into it >>> >>> Regards, >>> Rajiv Rajani >>> >>> >>> On Tue, Jan 3, 2023 at 4:29 PM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE >>> <rajiv at ishare.eu> wrote: >>> >>> Dear Partners, >>> >>> As have been sent earlier following deliverables have >>> been shared for your contribution and review many times. >>> Given that the deadline was already the end of December, >>> can we please expedite its finalisation? >>> >>> D1.4 - Train the Trainers Program >>> <https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1HS86OinRd5SU4gpncqpXD5uooXhbIR4UDeEm30g4wKs/edit#slide=id.p> >>> - I see some contribution is still pending, can you >>> finish the same at earliest? >>> D1.7 - i4Trust Onboarding Kit >>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9j9kUES2JHg076aJXR73pVprX9nwI7FmR6GgujN2GQ/edit#heading=h.xwd6v0nwb2xe> >>> - I have updated the document as per our last discussion >>> for my part, remaining contributions are pending >>> D4.1 - Report on B2B Data Sharing Mentoring Program >>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WG8KEXu1cigQP-VfoIuAcB1YTh-yIk5A_LpC_rAAbxs/edit#heading=h.xwd6v0nwb2xe> - >>> I see mostly the content is updated, however, still some >>> of the items are pending. Can you finish and review the >>> document? >>> >>> >>> >>> Regards, >>> Rajiv Rajani >>> CTO >>> >>> >>> >>> iSHARE Foundation >>> +31 61 796 2003 <tel:+31617962003> >>> iSHARE.eu <https://www.ishare.eu/> >>> rajiv at ishare.eu >>> >>> <https://iSHARE.eu> >>> -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/i4trust/attachments/20230124/3184c5ad/attachment.html>
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