Hi Juanjo, Thank you for the review and comments. I have gone through them. There are still some open comments if you can have a look at them. On section 4, I have added comments and shared with you my rationale of having that section. Regards, Rajiv Rajani On Tue, Jan 24, 2023 at 12:52 PM Juanjo Hierro <juanjose.hierro at fiware.org> wrote: > Hi Rajiv, > > I have conducted a careful revision of D4.1. > > In general, the document is well structured, with a lot of details which > helps the reader to understand what happened. Very good in that respect. > > However, it was a surprise to find that there were several parts of the > document which apparently were copy and paste of communications of the > experiments or global coordination meeting minutes. As a consequence, the > tone used (e.g., "during the workshop ... your experiment ..." or "... > Juanjo tends to think that we should run it virtually ..."). Thanks god I > decided to go for this careful review instead of taking as granted > everything was ok (and it seemed from a high level review). > > The decisions on verb tense to use were sometimes rather strange. I > found inconsistencies in the verb tense being used when describing a stage > and what happened during the stage. Thus, stage 0, 1 and 2 were described > in present tense (a bit strange) while the description of stage 3 was in > past tense. I then have changed them all to be past tense since this is a > report of something that happened, this way also making them consistent). > It was strange that a future tense was used in some cases referring to > things that took place in the past (overall, when the date was given, e.g., > "The Welcome event will take place virtually ... until January 28th > 2022"). I moved them also to past tense. Bottom line, I tried to do my > best to leave things as harmonized and meaningful as possible but took > quite some time and rather detailed review. > > Besides, that lot of suggested edits here and there. > > Please review the suggested edits and produce a clean version we can > submit. > > I will take care of D1.7 tonight. > > Cheers, > > Juanjo > > > On 23/1/23 11:35, Juanjo Hierro wrote: > > Hi, > > As explained on whatsapp, review of the Playbook kept me busy all the > time I had booked for reviews during the weekend. Now deliverables 1.7 and > 4.1 are top priority. > > I'm currently on D4.1 as you explained to me that is a longer hanging > fruit. > > Cheers, > > Juanjo > > > On 23/1/23 10:37, Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE wrote: > > Hi Juanjo, > > It's been days and no updates from your end are still part of the > document. Can you finish the updates today as we had discussed. I would > like that these deliverables are submitted today itself. > > Regards, > Rajiv Rajani > > > On Tue, Jan 17, 2023 at 6:36 PM Juanjo Hierro <juanjose.hierro at fiware.org> > wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> I plan to finalize my final review tonight. Unfortunately, I couldn't >> spend the time I was planning during the weekend and yesterday and today >> got very busy. >> >> Cheers, >> >> Juanjo >> On 17/1/23 09:32, Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE wrote: >> >> Dear Partners, >> >> Can you please finish your part in D4.1 and D1.7 deliverables. As was >> discussed last Friday, I was expecting updates in D1.7 but I do not see any >> updates. >> For D4.1 there are only a few comments, if you can close them, we can >> prepare that deliverable for submission. >> >> Regards, >> Rajiv Rajani >> >> >> On Mon, Jan 9, 2023 at 10:24 AM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE <rajiv at ishare.eu> >> wrote: >> >>> Dear Partners, >>> >>> I have not seen a single edit in any of these deliverables from any of >>> you. Can you please make sure that you finish the deliverables today so we >>> can submit them asap? >>> >>> Especially, D1.7 has quite some edits pending and have been tagged to >>> relevant people, please look into it >>> >>> Regards, >>> Rajiv Rajani >>> >>> >>> On Tue, Jan 3, 2023 at 4:29 PM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE <rajiv at ishare.eu> >>> wrote: >>> >>>> Dear Partners, >>>> >>>> As have been sent earlier following deliverables have been shared for >>>> your contribution and review many times. Given that the deadline was >>>> already the end of December, can we please expedite its finalisation? >>>> >>>> D1.4 - Train the Trainers Program >>>> <https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1HS86OinRd5SU4gpncqpXD5uooXhbIR4UDeEm30g4wKs/edit#slide=id.p> >>>> - I see some contribution is still pending, can you finish the same at >>>> earliest? >>>> D1.7 - i4Trust Onboarding Kit >>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9j9kUES2JHg076aJXR73pVprX9nwI7FmR6GgujN2GQ/edit#heading=h.xwd6v0nwb2xe> >>>> - I have updated the document as per our last discussion for my part, >>>> remaining contributions are pending >>>> D4.1 - Report on B2B Data Sharing Mentoring Program >>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WG8KEXu1cigQP-VfoIuAcB1YTh-yIk5A_LpC_rAAbxs/edit#heading=h.xwd6v0nwb2xe> - >>>> I see mostly the content is updated, however, still some of the items are >>>> pending. Can you finish and review the document? >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> Regards, >>>> Rajiv Rajani >>>> CTO >>>> >>>> >>>> iSHARE Foundation >>>> +31 61 796 2003 <+31617962003> >>>> iSHARE.eu <https://www.ishare.eu/> >>>> rajiv at ishare.eu >>>> >>>> <https://iSHARE.eu> >>>> >>> -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/i4trust/attachments/20230124/34f0de84/attachment-0001.html>
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