Hi Juanjo, As has been discussed yesterday, can you either finish the deliverable D1.7 or send extension request to PO. I still see that this deliverable has not been worked upon. Regards, Rajiv Rajani On Tue, Jan 24, 2023 at 6:03 PM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE <rajiv at ishare.eu> wrote: > Hi Juanjo, > > Thank you for the review and comments. I have gone through them. There are > still some open comments if you can have a look at them. On section 4, I > have added comments and shared with you my rationale of having that section. > > Regards, > Rajiv Rajani > > > On Tue, Jan 24, 2023 at 12:52 PM Juanjo Hierro <juanjose.hierro at fiware.org> > wrote: > >> Hi Rajiv, >> >> I have conducted a careful revision of D4.1. >> >> In general, the document is well structured, with a lot of details >> which helps the reader to understand what happened. Very good in that >> respect. >> >> However, it was a surprise to find that there were several parts of the >> document which apparently were copy and paste of communications of the >> experiments or global coordination meeting minutes. As a consequence, the >> tone used (e.g., "during the workshop ... your experiment ..." or "... >> Juanjo tends to think that we should run it virtually ..."). Thanks god I >> decided to go for this careful review instead of taking as granted >> everything was ok (and it seemed from a high level review). >> >> The decisions on verb tense to use were sometimes rather strange. I >> found inconsistencies in the verb tense being used when describing a stage >> and what happened during the stage. Thus, stage 0, 1 and 2 were described >> in present tense (a bit strange) while the description of stage 3 was in >> past tense. I then have changed them all to be past tense since this is a >> report of something that happened, this way also making them consistent). >> It was strange that a future tense was used in some cases referring to >> things that took place in the past (overall, when the date was given, e.g., >> "The Welcome event will take place virtually ... until January 28th >> 2022"). I moved them also to past tense. Bottom line, I tried to do my >> best to leave things as harmonized and meaningful as possible but took >> quite some time and rather detailed review. >> >> Besides, that lot of suggested edits here and there. >> >> Please review the suggested edits and produce a clean version we can >> submit. >> >> I will take care of D1.7 tonight. >> >> Cheers, >> >> Juanjo >> >> >> On 23/1/23 11:35, Juanjo Hierro wrote: >> >> Hi, >> >> As explained on whatsapp, review of the Playbook kept me busy all the >> time I had booked for reviews during the weekend. Now deliverables 1.7 and >> 4.1 are top priority. >> >> I'm currently on D4.1 as you explained to me that is a longer hanging >> fruit. >> >> Cheers, >> >> Juanjo >> >> >> On 23/1/23 10:37, Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE wrote: >> >> Hi Juanjo, >> >> It's been days and no updates from your end are still part of the >> document. Can you finish the updates today as we had discussed. I would >> like that these deliverables are submitted today itself. >> >> Regards, >> Rajiv Rajani >> >> >> On Tue, Jan 17, 2023 at 6:36 PM Juanjo Hierro <juanjose.hierro at fiware.org> >> wrote: >> >>> Hi, >>> >>> I plan to finalize my final review tonight. Unfortunately, I couldn't >>> spend the time I was planning during the weekend and yesterday and today >>> got very busy. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> >>> Juanjo >>> On 17/1/23 09:32, Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE wrote: >>> >>> Dear Partners, >>> >>> Can you please finish your part in D4.1 and D1.7 deliverables. As was >>> discussed last Friday, I was expecting updates in D1.7 but I do not see any >>> updates. >>> For D4.1 there are only a few comments, if you can close them, we can >>> prepare that deliverable for submission. >>> >>> Regards, >>> Rajiv Rajani >>> >>> >>> On Mon, Jan 9, 2023 at 10:24 AM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE <rajiv at ishare.eu> >>> wrote: >>> >>>> Dear Partners, >>>> >>>> I have not seen a single edit in any of these deliverables from any of >>>> you. Can you please make sure that you finish the deliverables today so we >>>> can submit them asap? >>>> >>>> Especially, D1.7 has quite some edits pending and have been tagged to >>>> relevant people, please look into it >>>> >>>> Regards, >>>> Rajiv Rajani >>>> >>>> >>>> On Tue, Jan 3, 2023 at 4:29 PM Rajiv Rajani | iSHARE <rajiv at ishare.eu> >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Dear Partners, >>>>> >>>>> As have been sent earlier following deliverables have been shared for >>>>> your contribution and review many times. Given that the deadline was >>>>> already the end of December, can we please expedite its finalisation? >>>>> >>>>> D1.4 - Train the Trainers Program >>>>> <https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1HS86OinRd5SU4gpncqpXD5uooXhbIR4UDeEm30g4wKs/edit#slide=id.p> >>>>> - I see some contribution is still pending, can you finish the same at >>>>> earliest? >>>>> D1.7 - i4Trust Onboarding Kit >>>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9j9kUES2JHg076aJXR73pVprX9nwI7FmR6GgujN2GQ/edit#heading=h.xwd6v0nwb2xe> >>>>> - I have updated the document as per our last discussion for my part, >>>>> remaining contributions are pending >>>>> D4.1 - Report on B2B Data Sharing Mentoring Program >>>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WG8KEXu1cigQP-VfoIuAcB1YTh-yIk5A_LpC_rAAbxs/edit#heading=h.xwd6v0nwb2xe> - >>>>> I see mostly the content is updated, however, still some of the items are >>>>> pending. Can you finish and review the document? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Regards, >>>>> Rajiv Rajani >>>>> CTO >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> iSHARE Foundation >>>>> +31 61 796 2003 <+31617962003> >>>>> iSHARE.eu <https://www.ishare.eu/> >>>>> rajiv at ishare.eu >>>>> >>>>> <https://iSHARE.eu> >>>>> >>>> -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <https://lists.fiware.org/private/i4trust/attachments/20230131/6e9cc0dc/attachment.html>
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