[Fiware-cloud] Cloud HLDesc -- another update

[Alex Glikson]

I've made another update of the document (
https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/107/FIWARE+HLDesc+Cloud+v0.6.doc
). The main changes are:
- accepted recent changes
- removed "Closed" comments
- changed the order of GEs (moved PaaS until after Service Management)
- made few editing changes
- added few more comments
- assigned owners to recently added comments

Please, review -- focusing on Open comments (especially those that 
assigned to you).
I also remind you to send your contribution to the "Terms" section.

Thanks,
Alex

P.S. if you want to keep additional files or copies of the document on 
Forge, please use fiware-cloud space, and make sure you make them 
'private'




From:   Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM at IBMIL
To:     fiware-cloud at lists.fi-ware.eu
Date:   20/06/2011 03:33 PM
Subject:        [Fiware-cloud] Fw: Cloud HLDesc update
Sent by:        fiware-cloud-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu



Friends, 

We need to deliver a stable snapshot of the HLDesc by the EOD Wednesday, 
ready for integration with the rest of the chapters. 

A key section which is requires out attention and needs to be finalized 
now is the Glossary/Terminology. 

Please, try sending your contribution (could be just a set of bullets, in 
a note to the list) before our conference call tomorrow, so that we can 
review and discuss before delivering the snapshot on Wednesday. 

Thanks, 
Alex 

P.S. I'm still working on comments throughout the document.. Juanjo is 
also doing a review, and will send his comments. 

----- Forwarded by Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM on 20/06/2011 03:26 PM ----- 

From:        Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM 
To:        fiware-cloud at lists.fi-ware.eu 
Date:        19/06/2011 12:56 AM 
Subject:        Cloud HLDesc update 



All, 

Thanks to everyone who reviewed the document. Please, see a new integrated 
draft at 
https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/107/FIWARE+HLDesc+Cloud+v0.5.doc 
 (sorry for the delay). Few things for your attention: 
1.      I've reviewed all the comments, added some new comments and added 
"STATUS" within the text of each of them (after an initial cleanup and 
consolidation). 
For those marked "Closed" -- the authors of the comments are requested to 
indicate whether they still think that something needs to be done 
(otherwise the comment will be deleted in the next revision). 
For those marked "Open", I've also assigned an "OWNER". The owners are 
requests to address the comments ASAP and send the updates to the list (if 
possible -- by the EOD Monday).
2.      I've replaced the architecture diagrams with a new one, and made 
few changes to the GEs -- please, review.

I am going to make another round of reviewing the document on Sunday, and 
plan to send more comments -- stay tuned :-) 

Regards, 
Alex _______________________________________________
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