[Fiware-cloud] Cloud HLDesc -- another update

[FERNANDO LOPEZ AGUILAR]

I've made another update based on the document recently send by Alex (FIWARE HLDesc Cloud v0.6 TID<https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/admin/index.php?editdoc=1&docid=172&group_id=14>).

I put it in a Uncategorized folder within the fiware-cloud space...

regarding the new comments, I need some more time to consider it.

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El 21/06/2011, a las 00:30, Alex Glikson escribió:

I've made another update of the document (https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/107/FIWARE+HLDesc+Cloud+v0.6.doc). The main changes are:
- accepted recent changes
- removed "Closed" comments
- changed the order of GEs (moved PaaS until after Service Management)
- made few editing changes
- added few more comments
- assigned owners to recently added comments

Please, review -- focusing on Open comments (especially those that assigned to you).
I also remind you to send your contribution to the "Terms" section.

Thanks,
Alex

P.S. if you want to keep additional files or copies of the document on Forge, please use fiware-cloud space, and make sure you make them 'private'




From:        Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM at IBMIL
To:        fiware-cloud at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-cloud at lists.fi-ware.eu>
Date:        20/06/2011 03:33 PM
Subject:        [Fiware-cloud] Fw: Cloud HLDesc update
Sent by:        fiware-cloud-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-cloud-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu>
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Friends,

We need to deliver a stable snapshot of the HLDesc by the EOD Wednesday, ready for integration with the rest of the chapters.

A key section which is requires out attention and needs to be finalized now is the Glossary/Terminology.

Please, try sending your contribution (could be just a set of bullets, in a note to the list) before our conference call tomorrow, so that we can review and discuss before delivering the snapshot on Wednesday.

Thanks,
Alex

P.S. I'm still working on comments throughout the document.. Juanjo is also doing a review, and will send his comments.

----- Forwarded by Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM on 20/06/2011 03:26 PM -----

From:        Alex Glikson/Haifa/IBM
To:        fiware-cloud at lists.fi-ware.eu<mailto:fiware-cloud at lists.fi-ware.eu>
Date:        19/06/2011 12:56 AM
Subject:        Cloud HLDesc update
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All,

Thanks to everyone who reviewed the document. Please, see a new integrated draft at https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/7/107/FIWARE+HLDesc+Cloud+v0.5.doc  (sorry for the delay). Few things for your attention:
1.        I've reviewed all the comments, added some new comments and added "STATUS" within the text of each of them (after an initial cleanup and consolidation).

 *   For those marked "Closed" -- the authors of the comments are requested to indicate whether they still think that something needs to be done (otherwise the comment will be deleted in the next revision).
 *   For those marked "Open", I've also assigned an "OWNER". The owners are requests to address the comments ASAP and send the updates to the list (if possible -- by the EOD Monday).

2.        I've replaced the architecture diagrams with a new one, and made few changes to the GEs -- please, review.

I am going to make another round of reviewing the document on Sunday, and plan to send more comments -- stay tuned :-)

Regards,
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