[Fiware-iot] IoT commented by Data and Context Management

[Haller, Stephan]

Hi Lorant,

I basically agree with your corrections. Regarding the issue of defining gateway, thing, backend etc., it would be really helpful to have some figure at the beginning (as you suggested in one of the answers), even though the formal definitions come at the end.

Some details (page numbers refer to the "Word" page, not the page number displayed):

*         Page 15 (2.2.1.2):

o   "[...] leverage on reader device-specific device abstraction drivers." Replace with
"[...] leverage device abstraction drivers to connect to specific reader devices using proprietary protocols".  I think that is clearer

o   "[...]the platforms existing today are not able to provide these kinds of solutions." Missing 's' in "kinds".

Regards,
-Stephan



From: fiware-iot-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu [mailto:fiware-iot-bounces at lists.fi-ware.eu] On Behalf Of Farkas, Lorant (NSN - HU/Budapest)
Sent: Mittwoch, 13. Juli 2011 16:13
To: fiware-iot at lists.fi-ware.eu
Subject: [Fiware-iot] IoT commented by Data and Context Management


Dear All,

In the meantime between our weekly meeting and now we received a version commented by the data and context management team.

I stored here:
https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/11/270/v024_IOTSE_reviewed_by_DCM.doc
And rather than concentrating on a merged document with all our comments for the different chapters, I modified our own contribution according to the received comments where I saw it appropriate and I also answered to the comments. This document is attached here:

https://forge.fi-ware.eu/docman/view.php/11/271/v025_IOTSE_reviewed_by_NSN_based_on_DCM_comments.doc

I would really appreciate if some of you could take a second look before tomorrow morning 10 AM when I have the synchronization meeting with Juanjo.

Thanks & Br,

Lorant

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